I LOVED IT THE WHOLE THING!

This was a cute story. Definitely had twists and turns that I wasn't expecting. I read this all at once, chapter after chapter. thank you for all the hard work you put into this story. Without writers like you, I dont know what I'd do.

Omgomgomgomgomg! Just finished chapter 1 and I am immediately going to read chapter 2! Forgive me if I only respond every few chapters after this. After only one chapter, I'm already hooked!

good story

This story is awesome! I absolutely love it...once I started reading it..i couldnt stop...i love trunks! *evil grin*

Oh Liked it ALOT! more Cammy bashing would have been alot of fun. but you can't get everything I guess.

a lovely story of how Pan and trunks got toghether.
Good job!

Frida

I really really really really really really really

really really really really really

really really really
really LOVE IT
thanks very much for writing it...

WOW! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! I READ 30 CHAPTERS AND IM STILL ALIVE AND IN THE SAME MONTH! WOOHO...AND THE SAME YEAR! AMAZING! AHAHHAHAH! WEll i'll check out some of your other stories too, ya? alright! take care!-NicePersonWhoSendsReveiws

man! you keep making me break my set of 'rules'! CURSE YOU! LOL JUST KIDDING! i had to send a reveiw now because i was afraid if i waited until the last chapter i'd be dead. i mean seriously! 30 chapters? ahahah! well good job! take care, ya?-NicePersonWhoSendsReveiws

i love it! i love it! i love it! that was AWESOME! all the review specials rocked! if only i had started reading this fic earlier i could have helped kill Cammy *sulks* oh well, kyoko is awesome! and aiko.. hmm where have i heard that name before? :P j/k you and AMCM74 are the BEST! since you've had SO many reviews i doubt u will even read this one but i thought u deserved to know that theres another person out here that thinks your fics are awesome! *hugs*

awesome so far!

Hey that was probably one of the most best fanfics I have ever read. It got better and better each time I went on to a new chapter. Good job so far. I hope you will consider starting a new fanfic soon. I can't wait.
LOL

Well I have a bit of a mixed review...I liked this story a lot, until Cammy went psycho...it was all downhill from there. I think you didn't do as good of a job as you could of with her, I'm glad she was captured but things just didn't pan out very successfully, plot-wise. The ending of the fic was really rished compared to the rest of it and I was horribly disappointed that they adopted TJ...it just ruined it for me.

I did enjoy the story on a whole though and appreciate the time and effort you put into it, I would still recommend it to anyone looking for good fanfiction and I look forward to reading your other stuff...merry christmas!

kool fanfic i liked it when u killed that bitch did she get sent to hell i hope so any way i love ur fanfic

ooh, kyoko and goten! me likes the idea mucho! (loook! i remember stuff from spanish class!)