|Reviews for Prologue: 1 week after|
| sushiisawesome 4/17/11 . chapter 1
| GoddessOfOlympia 12/15/10 . chapter 1
Thats intense. I fully did not know Mrs Jones first name is Tulip although I have a sneaking suspicion its metioned in the books. I like the use of first person
| Just Silly Me 5/5/09 . chapter 1
This was good. My only complaint is that the grammar was... okay, not so good...
Otherwise, good job! PLEASE fix your grammar, I am begging you! You have great potential, but I cannot, and I repeat, CANNOT STAND IT WHEN GRAMMAR IS BAD!
Thank you for reading my ranting. Heh.
-Just Silly Me