keep writing

Thats intense. I fully did not know Mrs Jones first name is Tulip although I have a sneaking suspicion its metioned in the books. I like the use of first person

This was good. My only complaint is that the grammar was... okay, not so good...

Otherwise, good job! PLEASE fix your grammar, I am begging you! You have great potential, but I cannot, and I repeat, CANNOT STAND IT WHEN GRAMMAR IS BAD!

Thank you for reading my ranting. Heh.

-Just Silly Me