once again good chapter

pretty good

pretty good,keep it up

Definitely one of the more interesting crossovers for Naruto. You did a great job with Gauron's personality as well as Naruto's and Ayaname's and your idea for starting the story was rather creative. I look forward to your next chapter.

this is getting 9 out of 10 I hope you make more plz this is great oh can't wait until I see Naruto with Tessa they seem to be a good pair.

Not bad and this is a crossover i've been hoping to see for a while but I wish you would make Naruto kind of like Heero Yui from Gundam Wing and his machine similar looking to Wing Zero with a connection that Heero had with Wing Zero. It would give Sousuke competition and Naruto be little more subtle than Sousuke and able to blend in better.

Thanks and please update soon

I like the fic though it doesn't make sense why konoha is being bombed i mean is it was hidden village wouldn't they question they were there, anyway update soon.