This is beautiful, so poetic. (:

Hey, this was really good! Depressing, but good! My one con-crit thing is the "self destructive blanket lined with TNT". It makes me think of the road runner...

Hey there! This is good D I like it lots.

The line "unless it is ripped from his throat" was all OHMYGOSH fantastic imagery moment for me. All twisted and messed up, but still hurt so good. Umm...and please, please, don't take this as being stuck up, but there's a site called , and it's for original stories and stuff, and I think it'd be really cool if you posted this there.

THATS ALL!