M, good story, interesting, like to see some more please!

School's been busy. What does one do when trying to avoid learning about various glutamate receptors at 10:00PM? Catch up on fanfiction of course! Glad I did. This new story is really working out (sometimes a really great idea kinda fizzles, glad that's not the case), love to see what happens.

Oh my god oh my god oh my god! KOH! I can't believe he did that! I love how you describe...being inside Koh! Kind of like imagining a place that contradicts everything that exists...and yet it does. Does that even make any sense? I can't wait to see how Zuko reacts! Update soon!

Koh stole Katara's face? And now the Avatar and Fire Lord are trying to rescue her? Will they save Ummi as well? Please update soon. ;)

Oh, Koh have Katara **! She is going to beat him up!

Great chapter, great idea! Update when you can!

Please update soon! This was an amazing chapter!

Amazingness! Update soon!

...woah. that was all I had to say by the end of chapter three because it was so good! you were able to capture the emotions of both Zuko and Aang so well especially during their conflict when Aang confessed that he still was in love with Katara. I am enjoying this new villain that was brought back from the avatar series. koh in my opinion was a powerful villain that did not get much screen time but im glad to see him in your story and from both sides of the spirit world. enjoying the story so far and i definitely can't wait till you update!! ^_^

This was a wonderful chapter, truly it was! I love the description of Sokka and Hakoda's pain, and Zuko's as well, Iroh's words and Suki's silent comfort. Then with Katara's part, her quick observations and instantaneous understanding are spot on, I really enjoyed reading her reactions and her words along with Ummi.

Definitely can't wait for the next chapter!

Yea for updates! Wow. This is an unique, awesome storyline. It's nice to read something a little different than the normal storylines out there. And you tell it so well. I can't wait to read more.

I adore your writing style which for myself-makes the story more interactive. But the Basic storyline, Im not really sure what to make of it really. I didn't particularly like the beginning of how they were wed as personally I like AU, and finding relationships build up gratually. Also the first few chapters were slightly creepy. :)
But in this chapter it was much better. The reactions to the disappearances were accurate portrayals of the characters and the bit with Katara and Ummi inside Koh was ingenius. I found it full of suspence and loved it.
Keep it up because I want to know what happens.
So glad you found your Avatar muse again :D
Miss Katara x

It's great that you're continuing this! I really like that we're still getting Katara's story as well as Zuko and Aang's.

One thing I'm confused about, though, is why Sokka isn't going. I understand people need to stay behind and look after Katara, but I figured they'd want a couple of people who are talented as non-benders since they're going to the spirit world.

It was definitely worth the wait!! I love how you incorporated Ummi into the story. I feel so awful for her though, the love of her life has died trying to save her, and now she's been there for centuries... just waiting. Gosh that's horrible... But I'm loving this story so far... try not to make the next wait too long!! :)

Once again, your brilliance amazes me! I love Zuko! I love love, simply LOVE him! Especially how you've portrayed him! You've captured him really well! And...and.. the way you state things for Katara, from switching from the past tense to the present because she is in a timeless state? OMG! So BLOODY brilliant and dramatic and just so...so...sigh. I'm all out of vocabulary. I can't wait for your next update! I hope to drool more of Zuko too. Lol.

Oh! I'm so glad you're writing another Zutara story! It's so interesting so far too! Oh, and I don't know if you remember or anything, but I believe it was mentioned in the show that Iroh made a journey to the Spirit World at one time (he was able to see Roku's dragon carrying Aang when Iroh was captured while taking a bath). Can't wait for the next chapter, update asap!

~nessie~