I LOVE THIS SONG!
But gahh, it's so tragic, and sad.
Such beautiful writing you have though, almost made me cry :\
xx

Loved it! *reaches for tissues*

I LOVE YOU FOR USING MICHAEL BUBLE.
<3

Great job!

*sobs*

Can't believe I didn't find this earlier.

This was sad. Maybe I should've read it BEFORE the SecNav one, lol.

Great job,
~Mila

I never approved of Gibbs' involvement with Hollis as it always felt like Gibbs cheated on Jenny while he was involved with Hollis.

"Thunderstorms raged over Paris, turning the usually peaceful and comforting night sky into a battlefield of noise and flickering light. Rain was ruthless on the windows and rooftops, pounding and incessant," - I LOVE thunderstorms: Johannesburg's are particularly good.
"Jenny tired to block the haunting images of her dreams from her mind’s eye," - "Jenny tried".

"Jethro shrugged his shoulders, glancing around to find Jenny. Her back was to him now, shoulders set; she had turned to another French tight ass, and, judging by the look on the woman next to her victim’s face, was making him drool. “It seems you are not the only American being, ah, charming this night,” the woman next to him noted, a little scornfully. “You can tell she’s American?” Jethro asked, restraining his scowl as Jenny turned her attention on a man who did not have a woman by his side and managed to pull him into a close dance on the floor, alongside a few other couples. His blood boiled as he saw the man pull her tight, and watched her let him. “No French woman would flirt with the ambassador,” the Russian woman said, distastefully, “right in front of his wife.” - IMO, Svetlana (if it is her) is just pissed she is not as beautiful as Jenny.
"Her crimson hair was damp at the ends again, and the few curls escaped and blown across her face were wet as well." - Why the wet hair? Did Svetlana throw a glass of champagne in Jenny's face?
"Perhaps this explains why Svetlana has such a grudge against Jenny? :]" - Works for me.

"leaving behind her nothing but the coat and her cold letter buried in its pocket." - She left that beautiful coat?! That alone would have broken MY heart!

Wow...I cried.

Excellent work!

*sobs* Brilliantly written! I feel so sad now. :( In a good way though, if that makes any sense at all.

I think you captured Jethro's emotions really well.

As much as I like angst, I look foward to the next chapter =)

Mil

Such a beautiful piece, you write angst so so so well. And the song you used is one of my all time favorite. Great job on this one!

Whew...that was very powerful. Well done to say the least. Fluff would be nice next time as a recovery method.

That. Was. Bloody. Brilliant. I've *loved* that song for such a long time...and wow. You totally did it justice. Wonderful job!