Good Job!

You better update soon!
Nice cliffy in the end!

Continue soon! I wanna know what 'Mr. Lucas' says!! :)

~Sleek Blan~

That was amazing i think you schould keep going

I'm not normally a fan of OCs, but I like Erin. You've written her very realistically. I'm definitely very interested in where this story is going, and I can't wait to hear what Mr Lucas has to say, lol. Update soon please :-)