 suerum 2009-05-05 . chapter 1This is an interesting story because of the genesis effect. How Spinelli makes the jump from Maxie, gives it an organic reason and then because you're working on the trilogy (hint, hint)Jason's epiphany is starting and needs to still be codified. I really liked this :Maybe good and bad blonde ones and angels of death, and just plain angels are not meant for him. He never has been normal, why should it start with that? Overall, a nice angsty, film noir feel and 'Nebula' great name as Spinelli concurs, at least initially! |