Love it!

it's getting really interesting in the story and I can't wait until the next chapter comes out and to see what happens next with naruto and sasuke. Also naruto and sasuke will discover their deeper feelings for each other as well^_^

This story was soo cute! Loved it.

Lol, I loved this.

Hrmm hurr. I guess I have a 50-50 shot at getting which one you did...

Naruto?

Some of your conversations between Naruto and Sasuke didn't connect well. Also you kept repeating the same questions in their conversations but reworded them each time. I don't know but there's alot of things you can do to make this better. Like try different POVs. It makes it more intresting for the reader. Overall I'd give this a 6/10 comparing to all the other great stories I've read. But this was good anyway XD ♪♪♫♪♪

Nice story!

This is by far one of the best one-shots I have read in a while. The tention between the two was applied just right. The chemistry between Naruto and Sasuke was well writen. Thanks for sharing!

THAT WAS AMAZING. i loved the fluidity and the tone throughout the whole story. it was incredibly sexy without being overly pornographic. the humor and emotionality blended in with that sensual yet sweet sort of mood was just fantastic! ksafsdgjksdhgsjhg. FRIGGIN' AMAZING.

the question game! i adore the question game! it's so much fun to play and to read in fanfic. you can always twist that game to make it flirtatious. you guys really, really, really know how to set a mood what with the pool and the question game and the touching. i was literally entranced by it, as if i could actually see it happening in my head.

i really liked the characterization of sasuke and naruto too. it seems just like sasuke to exude sexiness all over the place but never go further than one-night stands simply because he is pining for his best friend. and naruto is just so...naruto. he's caring, he's funny, he's sweet -- he was written beautifully. both characters were!

the scene in the subway was just brilliant. it had the perfect amount of drama with the perfect amount of loving at the end. the last words made me smile, hehe. all in all, this is SHAMAZING~! :D

such an awesome story! :D
andd Ladelle was Sasuke! right?
maybe..im not too sure, hmm.
anyways, I loved it! and it would be so awesome if there was a sequel (:
If you guys have time, obviously.
Thanks so much for uploading! both of you :D

okay first of all:
the convo was awesome!! just how i'd expect them to answer and it was hilarious. i mean those two make quite a pair eh?
and thus i began to read the story and bravo *round of applause* awesome job. you and you're friend are very talented.
you certainly set the mood when writing. and details are very good. you ** details that authors don't add sometimes like the pool and (how you described each time they went to take a shot and take a swig from their beer) but it makes it that much more realistic.
also it was very sweet. disappointing that there was lemon though though i'm sure you would've written a very hot one (i'm a lemon freak).
i really love that line where naruto goes "so this is what being gay feels like"...just...i have to control myself form just laughing out loud. it just sounds like something naruto would say.
and the little kisses in both part 1 and two were written well.
good job, i am now willing to read your other stories on naruto.
keep it up! XD
-Jessica

Reyn is NARUTO! HAHAHA. :D I love it. It's so like Sasuke to think too much. XD

:D Yay! :D I loved it!
Okay, first off, Kiba's comment about Naruto taking care of the Asian kid who doesn't speak English was hilarious. Just knowing he was talking about Sasuke made me crack up. XD lol Brilliant!
Then the confrontation afterwards was so well done.
And its true, Sasuke is pretty. But he's not going to last for long by himself.

Great story! :)

aw
i loved it
so good :D

haha this was such a cute one-shot, I loved it! I couldn't tell who was who though lol the part with Kiba was hilarious.

pleaz tell me its not a one-shot. more chapters! and Ladelle and Ahja Reyn are awsome together (in a writing sense)