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armydude
2009-11-21 . chapter 1
"Do I need to know?"

A classic Ron line. I could just see him standing over the pool looking down at his smouldering son with that puzzled/confused look.
soulman3
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
Ha,Ha.A preteen boy with invisibile suit, even the sentence it's self sound like trouble.

Good thing Shego didn't catch him.While she was having a prative daughter and mother talk.I'll just hate to think what might of happen if a over protective mom would found a boy hidden in her daughter room.But then again, to James dislike of Shego saying "He's not a boy, he's James".
RonHeartbreaker
2009-05-16 . chapter 1
Another terribly cute tale of this endearing twosome. The running gag of Shego's hyperprotectiveness is delightful. "Sorry. Project sorry, not YES!" - good one.
Reader101w
2009-05-07 . chapter 1
Great story, I realy love the way you continue the series in this universe.

I hope more of these stories come up.

keep up the good writing,
Reader101w
bigherb81
2009-05-06 . chapter 1
I think what makes these stories so funny is the overprotective Shego. I mean it seems like it would be out of character for her, but to think about it you could see it happening. I didn't really expect any angst from this, but I was curious as to whether or not James and Cindy will go the way of Kim and Ron. The wedding would be something to see whether they take over the world for the ceremony or have it as normal as they can. Great job on this one I know your not doin angst right now, but I hope that you finish some of your other stories too.
Mr. Wizard
2009-05-06 . chapter 1
Pleased to hear that the gods of this universe are merciful. Hilarious.
Classic Cowboy
2009-05-05 . chapter 1
a little big of angst wouldn't hurt. After all it took a little kick in the gut to get Kim and Ron together, right? I'm really enjoying your one shots showing James and Cindy grow, and it is quite unusual to see such light and funny from you after reading your earlier works. Really shows a great deal of depth as of a writer my friend.

I just can't help but think the chaos that'd be if/when Cindy and James got together and Shego and Kim "planning" the wedding... one word comes to mind for that (hopefully near-)future concept. "Elope"

great stuff! can't wait for more stuff from ya!
ErnestTheGuy
2009-05-05 . chapter 1
lols training wheels. James and Cindy are awesome and i cant believe you had Shego of all people take about that...
screaming phoenix
2009-05-05 . chapter 1
That was just so funny it almost hurts to read it for the pain in my side.
It looks like James takes after his uncles more than his father. Hr really should listen to that inner voice more. But what would you expect from the son of Kim Possible and Ron Stoppable anyway? As usual, excellent work!
Captain IT
2009-05-05 . chapter 1
When is poor James ever going to learn when you go around " poking the bear"

Keep it KP real

Captain IT
JCS1966
2009-05-05 . chapter 1
Glad to hear the kids won't have so much Angst in this universe. I was worried after reading about Kim and Ron fighting in the first chapter in "Earth Day."

I have a feeling, though, that Cindy may comsider Nunnery in a few years.

James...a bit of advice; Start listening. You'll live longer.

Awesome stuff, Mr. Paris. Don't be too long with Capter 2 of ED, hear?
MrDrP
2009-05-05 . chapter 1
Other than some typos, an enjoyable read. James and Cindy continue to deliver the humorous goods. And Shego? Well, I definitely want to see more of her in her overprotective Mama mode -- very funny stuff.
eoraptor
2009-05-05 . chapter 1
this is very cute and fun! I loved it... though I must curse you for forcing me to cookie out my own KP kiddlets, the much more odd ones O.o

darn yous! darn yous to heck!
CajunBear73
2009-05-05 . chapter 1
Man that was funny!

When Cindy comes of age to start noticing 'boys', she's gonna have it worse than Kim did with her dad. Glad James Possible didn't have any superpowers or Kim would be a virgin and unmarried until he was collecting Social Security or beyond...

Loved the mixing of Drakken's terminal ineptitude and calamity issues with assisting his daughter's upbringing and trying to be hip at the same time, still.

Ah, the day many young women detest has come to pass, and for Cindy it gets worse with her best friend, and obliviously still not a boy per Shego or noticeably so by Cindy..yet, manages to be where he was for this... LOL!

And he just had to put his two cents in and get a 'ride' he won't soon forget. Not that will deter him from more of the same 'incentive' for more in the future...

Glad the two best friends will not have darkness at their doors. Hope for further updates on the others though, when possible.

CB73
spectre666
2009-05-05 . chapter 1
Ah the soft gentle changes in a woman's life that move her from a sweet child to a raging maniac. (G) I think that little voice will retire and go to the bahamas before James learns. LOL
Thanks
Spectre
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