   Lovely Moonlight Maiden 5/20/02 . chapter 1Definately needs more chapiters or a sequal, but it's awesome. |
| Katelyn Peacecraft 4/7/02 . chapter 1 That was good! Why won't you finish it? |
| Fire aka kawaiioujoappelsnap 4/4/02 . chapter 1 same thing as i said in "my girl Videl" fic! |
| MuslimBarbie 3/14/02 . chapter 1 THAT'S SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SWEET! YOU SHOULD WRITE A SEQUEL SHOWING HOW PAN GROWS UP! |
| Villynaty 2/4/02 . chapter 1 too fast, too short. there was barely any story behind it. Make it longer. |
| Panny-Plan 1/15/02 . chapter 1 cute. that was really kawaii |
| lija 12/31/01 . chapter 1 A lovely G/V fic...how sweet... |
| Goku's Daughter 12/26/01 . chapter 1 luv it-love G/V |
| Saiyan Serpent 12/19/01 . chapter 1 Awww...that was sad...but so sweet in the end!...LOVED IT!...;D |
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