Great Idea...Love it!!


Can't wait for more!

nice!

OMI! (oh my invertebre) i love this story! you have to continue and update soon!

I love it keep wrighting i want to hear about Jazzy (Jaz hands) lol!




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loved it :D
update soon!!

I like this!

I'm a sucker for fairytales. i love the alice in wonderland idea, too. it totally matches her character. and the forbidden love, that makes a great story. i can't wait to see what happens to them! :)

Aww I like this so far. It is written quite nicely and I look forward to seeing where you take it. I love the way you have made Alice and it was interesting meeting the queens. Makes me sad that soon Alice won't be able to go around with Jasper and that he can never be with her but I'm sure something will change so that they can. :D Love it and look forward to the next chapter :D

this has the makings of a great story! i hop u update soon!

This is such an original idea! I love it so far. Alice In Wonderland is one of my favourite books/movies and I think you've started off really well. This is going to be great!

aww that was bitter sweet. is it going to be canon? this would be very much like a fairytale. i like it. please update soon! :)

Excellent chapter. Please update soon.

very interesting beggining...
can't wait to see what you do to this!

love it! sad though with the whole jasper cant have thing. so are you just going to fast forward 10 years or what..??

Aww...It's Cute! It's Like Romeo & Juliet But Modern-ish! :D

Love It!

Update Soon! x