Hello Forthright. It is always a pleasure to read your stories, yet I am ashamed to realize that only now am I giving a proper review (or if I have reviewed, it has been so long it has slipped my mind). In my defense, whenever I read the latest update, I feel the need to make sure I have read ALL of your latest chapters, and well... I admit to being very easily distracted. So here is the first (proper one) of many reviews. Sometimes it seems you are writing directly for me, for many of your stories' plots are ones that I have vaguely imagined in my mind. Your work is excellent, and coming from one who enjoys long chapters, I commend you on your skill for writing exceedingly short chapters and getting a great deal of meaning across. Congratulations on finishing this story, very clever with the last color Lime. I look forward to more updates.
Many Thanks
-Foxy n__n

I truly do not mean to be rude, but is this line correct?


“You want I should put her on a platter for you?”


It sounds... odd to me.

Sorry if it does turn out to be right. :)

I know that this is complete and all, but I can't help but feel that maybe "Sunrise" would have been a better choice than "Sunset". Nice stuff 'n' keep on updating.

Thank you, thank you, thank you. Goodness, this was such a joy to read. I can't describe it quite right, but you weaved a masterpiece of wonderfully composed and meaningful moments...You're quite an exceptional writer, and i loved Kagome and Sesshoumaru's chemistry and growth so much...wow.

Congratulations :) 100 chapters and an anniversary :)
I'd like to see what the reactions of the other family members are to her Mating :) like Kikyou and Kagome's pursuers but other then that well done on getting this far and finishing it :)

You know, I didn't think I would like this at first because I'm not one for a story written in snippets, but I love it so far =3

awesome just awesome it very good XD

When I saw your story I was like "DANG! 100 chapters??!" But they were so short that I had no problem reading them and it was a very intresting and sweet story! Great job!

Story was great!

It was really sweet and fun to read. It was fun to try to guess all of the colors before-hand, and your personalized Disclaimer for every chapter made it just that much more interesting to read. Having a 10 word chapter every 10 was a good idea, because otherwise it would have been much more tedious, and harder to fit into 100 chapters. Where the colors really in a list? Because I know how hard it is to fulfill every last one without overlapping. Keep writing!

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BUNNY

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Aha! More characters coming in. yay for that! :)

I still cant get over. Sesshoumaru as a butler. Hehehee. And even while being very butler like, he manages to be so himself. :)

I just about adore the fact that you wrote this in drabbles and with already structured themes which you used to fit around your story. How awesome is that? Very much I must say. Besides I must say, 100 words exactly? FTW. I very much adore your writing style even though clicking on this lovely story just reminded me that I missed the newest episode of Inuyasha. sigh. Thank goodness for repeats. Anyhow, back to the story. I loved the start, the premise is very interesting. Plus the thought of Sesshoumaru as a butler gives me the giggles.:)

wow this story was really good i loved the whole story from beginning to end keep up the amazing work