wow. that was great! youd think that the roy mustang would 'pick up after himself' and all but i guess not!

i loled hard core when they almost got cought. tehe.

the endig with the armstromgi n drag refrence was great! i lvoed it!

this was a verry funny adn well writen fan fic adn i hope to see nmorel like it! lol


(i love how the one time he doesnt call to brag about his daughter, they repay him by tehteing on his desk.. beautiful!)

cant wait to see more!

~soulless~

Really good! Lots of detail and a great writing stlye! <3

That was the longest lust odyssey I think I've read from your works... And the whole time, wow, I was shaking my head at the two, naughty, naughty. Wait, so they never did finish the work? This showed a different aspect in the lives of the FMA characters, how causal it is to just, I guess, do it. *blush*
And the last phrase in your story! Priceless.

LMFAO! aww poor Maes! lol that was sexy though lol i love how Roy wanted another round at another desk lol well thats roy for you ^-^

this is a pretty good story !
Very funny. Enjoyed it.

Really a good ending. Just awsome.

i found the story very much funny! :))

Didn't expect Maes would come back soon :))
I wonder if he placed a camera in there :))

just kidding :)

Your Stories are really cute:))
GO MSD!

+silvergothicsweettooth+

oh gosh! ahahahaha! that was funny! no wonder it's titled USE YOUR OWN DESK *laughing*! hahaha!

omg poor maes...

haha. :D nice oneshot.

USE YOUR OWN DESK! Now where's the fun in that? Why not use Hakuro's? Archer's? the Fuhrer's? Because wrecking other people's crap mean's not having to clean it~ Unfortunately, my friends have officially dubbed me as the person who they visit to steal their food, watch their DVD's, and wreck their basements (Not in that way! More like a "Let's see who can chug the most Mountain Dew while spilling it all over the furniture! or let's see who can destroy her DVD player! ooh! (points to a big red button) What does this do? (Blows up my house)Kinda way)

You're a really good writer... well described setting... characters... emotions... ABSOLUTELY AWESOME! The story was good too... never expected it.

Keep on writing!

Zat waz beautiful :) It might sound like some kind of fetish but I love desk lemons. Great job, and the ending was perfect :thumbs up:

that was really funny and at the same time awesome!
I also love some words that you use!
Best of luck with the other stories the you write!

I laughed out loud. Not many things make me do that, but this was funny.

Nice!!