 XxForest-DragonxX 2009-10-17 . chapter 1aww i loved that |
 Jamie - louise 2009-05-11 . chapter 1 *.* wow! that was definitely the most adorable fic i've ever read! It's a shame that not many people write about this pairing yet a lot of people write about syrus and zane as a couple. I'm not so keen on the stories about the truesdale broters, but alexis and atticus stories can be really nice when they're well written, and I loved yours. would you please write more for these two? x |
 Dewdrop 2009-05-07 . chapter 1 Aww! Cute story! I feel sad though, at all the stupid stories people tell their children that scares them in real life. "Your first kiss must be with someone really, really special". That scared poor Asuka into kissing her sibling, and then poor Fubuki thinks he's going to Hell for incest. Society is mad, but I loved this story. Thanks for writing it! |
 DarkMageGirl808 2009-05-05 . chapter 1Okay, as much as I can't stand incest, that was really good. The apocolipse must be coming. I actually liked an incest story. I guess you're just a really good author then! :) It was really cute! |
 Rei Uchiha - Slifer Red Ninja 2009-05-05 . chapter 1Ah, I love this story! Though... the tongue thing is a bit much, but this story is really cute! There needs to be more of this pairing... who cares if it's incest?! It's a cute pairing!
I hope you write more of this pairing in the future!
xXDarkUmbreonXx |
 KyoxSakiFan 2009-05-05 . chapter 1Am I going to hell because I like this pairing and one-shot very much? -shot-
Well, I really did enjoy it. I did think that it was a bit OOC for Fubuki to use tongue, specially since Asuka was as young as she was in this story, but I liked it anyway. I would just watch out for that one small detail next time.
BTW: Ignore any flames for the pairing that come your way. We need more of it, damn it! |