i really like the way this story is going... hurry up update! i'm on the edge of my seat! :>

Oh please finish. It is such a great portyal of their early relationship, and I can't wait any longer for the ending.

I like the idea of this story. The beginning said 1/2. Do you know when you might have a chance to finish part 2? I like stories like this and enjoy watchiing Qui-Gon learn to listen.

SWEET!

Aw, poor Obi!! Write more!! =D

That was so intense poor Obi-Wan. Qui-Gon is his usual stubborn self.

Great story.

Oh my gosh, that's brilliant! Where's the rest!I LOVE Qui-Gon angst, and that was so well-written my breath just caught!

Aww. Poor Obi-wan. Well written. Nice story.

Wow, friend! First off, I gotta say, I *love* your attention to detail here. You always have just the right amount of description--not too much as to bore or take away from the story, but not too little as to leave the reader going, Wait, what? As somebody who hasn't read the books, this is definitely appreciated in an immense kind of way. :)

Second off, I'm oh so loving this! Poor Obi! Also poor Qui-Gon. I can feel the guilt. Oh, I can *feel* it! This is shaping into a freakin' awesome story, and I can't wait for part two!

Blessings!
Kaley Faith

Poor Obi-Wan. But it's not Qui-Gon's fault, but he always blames himself for everything. It's like, "cheer up, dude" :) Anyway, great story!

Love it!

Aw! Poor Obi! Please update soon, the suspense is killing me!

Oh, great start! Everything was good -the plot unique and well-developed, and your grammar impeccable- but what I liked most was your portrayal of Qui-Gon. You've managed to find that perfect balance between a man who feels betrayed and doubts himself, and a man who cares deeply for his Padawan. Again, good job!