hnmm you're still missing the last ending you promised!

hehe re-reading... had to review again, :D

i'll say YEY at the other ending cos I just like to read! but i did liked this ending and the last one! this one coz Bryan helped Tala to go the same way Kai did, that was so col! he even arrange everything to give Tala the same tool XD YEEY

Alternative ending! This story is good! But very sad:( Still, you're a good author and as I read I couldn't find any mistakes. Yay

Great story, I really liked the whole concept, it was rather original and nicely written.

OMG! you can't just KILL THEM! NO!

gonna addthis, please don't end it like this! DX

update soon!

oh my god i loved! i wasn't expecing that ending! *adds to favorites* i read it last night but i was too tired to review, if i had review all the letters would hav been jumbled up lol of coure what did i dream about? two guys sitting on a bed stabbing each other! i blame this briliant story for that it wasn't a scary dream dont worry lol i really feel for tala i wanted to hug him soo badly! loved the ending!

OMG it was so great! i love yaoi and Kai and Tala but... when Tala was all freaked out and Kai just called him a queer, you wrote it so great that i didn't wanted Kai so close to tala! like feeling his desperation, so great! keep on the good work!