OMG!! Is Angela RABBID?!?!?

I'm a girl, but I'm pretty sure getting kick "where the sun doesn't shine" IS painful!!

Chapters 2 & 3 were awesome!!

COOL!

Yay!! You're back!! Loved the chapter!! You better update soon!! XD

Well I'm back from vacation!(I came back yesterday but was too lazy to do anything) I had a good time! Thank you for all the sweet reviews, no really thank you so much!! I'll be updating the story more frequently now. I am writing up the next chapter and it will be soon published tomorrow or the next day. Hopefully tomorrow haha.

Thank you very much for the awesome comments!! Once again I am back and ready to write.

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LOL! This chapter made me laugh really hard! Poor Ratchet he got kicked... you would know if you read it. D:

Nice chapter!!
I was laughing very hard!
Can't wait for the nxt chapter!!~~

Great story!! I couldn't stop laughing! None of the characters (perhaps besides Gears) would probably do this stuff, but that's what made me keep reading! I can't wait to see what you're gonna do next!! :3

Wow, really long chapter but I have to say probably the best! And yes add more action for me... Sque preferably Ratchet and me get together and get in the bed or something! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! You're fan fiction is so hilarious, even when it is very serious and dark. This is by far the BEST Ratchet and Clank fan fiction I've read! No doubt! The plot is very well laid out (I hope you still have your ideas), the dialogue is awesome, so much good figurative language, imagery, and humour, and the storyline progresses every chapter! Oh yeah and character development, I still remember when Talwyn got her mind reading ability, but I still wonder HOW she got it. Oh yes and the part at the mountain, that was classic and how they interacted was good. It almost made me cry. Anyways please update some more!! Best R&C fan fiction ever!!

LOL, whoops after that little "speech" given by Angela about Ratchet and her... Well... I put "You are have." Whoops anyways thanks for all the great reviews, and Yesenia I'll try to have more action for you.. XD

Gr... A cliffhanger! You made me make this account just to review this fan fiction... Anyways nice story

This story never ceases to amuse me. All that time they were pushing they could have pulled it! LOL! And you should have made Ratchet strip down... That would've made my day. Anyways please update soon. Great fan fiction; one of those that brings joy to my day. Thanks for writing it! :D

ooh! i sense a cliffhanger!

great fic btw!

This story is so good! Probably one of the best R&C fan fiction ever! There is alot of character development! The dramatic part almost made me cry... Anyways keep going this story is really good!