I just finished the whole thing now, this is really good! I really hope you continue with it.

i don't know what but something is off. it's mostly fine i think the story is good nut i think that the birthright grey is whats not sitting right it too ou t of the ordinary to much like Janelle with birthright black. i haven't finished reading yet so i'll let you know what i think at the end.

great story. kind of a cliff hanger ending though. are you going to continue it? or is it finished?

Great story. I hope u don't mind continueing!

God, I love this story. It's entirely charming and I especially love the dialog. What you've done with the characters is great and I love the second Generation. I look forward to reading more of your ffs.

Oh wow! What an interesting twist! I can't wait to here more, and I loved how you are alluding to Draca and Lorn's past involvement with the Night Prince while not giving away anything. MORE!

Fun story! ^-^ i thought i'd read it now that i have a day off.. o.o; I should've read it earlier. Gah. Anyways, good first chapter.. I shall read more!

Arrrghhh!
No! Torsh! He's going to die in the line of fire, and poor Raine is going to be so distraught...*weeps* No! You...you can't! EVIL NIGHT-PRINCE!! *bats his head with a pillow* I'm sending Mael after you!

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Oh my gosh, that was so freakin awesome!!!!!!! Psh x a million! Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh!!! You are such a great writer!!!!! ::does the dance of excitement:: I love this story, it's so good!! Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees!!!!!!!

Ooooo. Cool. I like it. I just decided I'd read it today, 'cause I was bored, and it was so good! I didn't expect it to be soooo great. Why was Janelle sad? You have to continue. Go, now! :)

*whine*

I love this, when is the next chapter going up? Who/what is Raine, and what are her plans for the future? Can Jaenelle have children, is that why she was so sad at Surreal's announcment? Don't leave me hanging here, PLEASE!?

sorry it took so long to review again. I have been having computer trouble at home so i decided to review you while i'm in school. I absolutly love the way this story is going. It is really great and i cant wait for the next chapter. well i go to go for now. see ya next review.

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Again, this chapter is great and well written. This is my favorite story in the section. . continue soon, please!

I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's great continue soon!!!

Hmm, Raine is starting to develop a character that really annoys me, buts thats ok- its your story and its well-written, and don't worry, I'm still definitely going to read and review