Aw! And I love your take on Aslan's speech to Edmund.

wow this is really very well done, like much of your other sutff (sets down to go through everything) I LOVE your familysluff. what can i say? it's better than anything else i've read. damn, i can't wait for more!
Love,
Lady Merlin

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Three you need to update.

Where IS that centaur? *Walks off muttering*

Excellent. It is hard for some people to learn to love, but Edmund is on the right path. I'm sure that Edmund will remember Aslan and not totally wrap himself up in his brother and his sisters, though I suspect that the Lion will miss him till he figures that part out.

~sigh~ he shouldnt' have ignored Peter like that to go to Aslan, i think. he's more important, even more than the lion deity or anything. what's the use if you don't put them first beyond something you worship? i suppose he needed to talk to him to sort it out though. but why he'd need aslan's forgivness i dont' know. really, i half expected him to say no to that question. what good is forgiveness except to make you feel better? it's important to forgive someone yes, but not ask for it yourself. you should just try to make things better if you're sorry. the ed he becomes at least would always put Peter beyond anything. ~shrugs~ i'm glad to see an update, don't get me wrong. i love your peter/edmund centric fics. you write brilliant H/C, and i think you'd be great with slash too if you tried.
cheers, anyway.

Aw...Poor Edmund...Not being able to touch with feeling panic...Will we find out why it happened?And I love the turn that things are taking!
Can't wait for Peter and Edmund to finally have their moment!

Wonderful chapter!I loved the idea that Edmund could be mildly autistic!It was very original!
I also loved to see how the changes in Edmund were already happening,though he probably didn't realize it!
Loved it!

I'm so sorry for the late review!But my life has been kinda of hectic lately...
Anyway...Great beggining!It was enough to spike my interest,but not enough to satisfy me!

Good for Edmund! Some kids are like that, having a hard time accepting and giving love; but you know, I bet Aslan can help with that.

I bet things started going wrong when Edmund went to the school where he was bullied, though--that part wasn't his fault.

Ahh... this is so sweet. *pets Edmund*
Please update soon. =]

oh how I love your stories!! they make me tear up almost every time and i can never get them out of my head when I'm writing my own. believe me, pne of the reasonsmy own updates take so long is becuase they are often so similar to your stories that I have to rewrite them!
thank you for making an otheriwse mind-numbingly boring day of revision a mind-numbingly boring day with a few minutes of fluffy, sentimental wonderfulness!
Tia

Ohh I liked this new story of yours, it's sweet and mushy. My favorite kind of storys ^_^

Thanks for writing,
Wildfire

Wow, just... Wow. Unbelievably heart-wrenching... Amazing!

that was such a sweet chapter! the ending scene with edmund reuniting with his siblings was very touching. i teared up a little when reading it. everyone needs to be forgiven, no matter what they have done. can't wait for the next chapter! =)