D: Oh...America. Why didn't you keep your promise? TT^TT

Aw poor kid

I loved the way you depicted Native America!! And how you had America's appearence change once the colonies started forming. The ending was perfect as well. Really really awesome and sad story.

Poor America. He can't keep a promise when he can't grow to learn it true meaning. It sad and he so confused. Anyway I loved this it really shows what happen to the old America and how it slowly faded away.

Aw, that was very lovely and sad at the sametime.
I always thought Alfred's mother had to be native before other european settle came.
It be funny to see Alfred as a native in the serious though. XD

Good job!

Oh wow, this is so beautiful; but so true and tragic.
I'm still speechless.

That was so sweet and it makes a lot of sense too. I always thought that Alfred might have been raised by the Native Americans before the Europeans came, glad to see other people think that as well.

I adore this story.

Keep up the great work.
Take Care.

*There's no reason not 2 love this story*
Finally there's one about Alfred and his 'mother' !=D i'm always feeling sorry for her, cannot imagine how sweet it was before Authur and Francis and the others took over(no other meanings,just talking about the manga). kinda into stories of familyship like this one:P