This was great!

Wow, this was awesome! You got into Tetsuo's and Kaneda's heads really well and I could see their day to day life in the gang being exactly like this. Plus it makes the scenes from the movie a whole lot more poignant if I imagine this as backstory, hahah. Poor Tetsuo...

That was great! So sad and emotional.

It is a lovly fanfiction. i love it. its a nice pairing.

If you don't mind me saying, Kaneda is such an a**! (sigh) Well, angst is the cornerstone of many an Akira fic, I guess it can't be helped... But, still, I guess I can hope for an actual stable relationship somewhere down the line in the Akira world, right?

Of is NeoTokyo just too corrupt and hopeless?

Either way, I enjoyed your story, I believe I reviewed the last one too. It's nice to see this fandom getting some love. It's too heavily ignored. :(

Thank you for posting. Your story is greatly appreciated.