NICE NICE NICE chapter. talk about heart-pounding. Sorus is soo awesome. I can't wait for Cora to wake up naked in his arms...+D At least she's not a total ignoramus and at least considered the sudo-prospect of being a couple with Sorus. I really wish Sorus would get fed up and just tell her she is his dream. OMG She is the densest woman I've ever heard of, but I'm praying for her. What I really want, is for her to get slapped in the face with the realization that she can't live without him. (*sings* "I think I'm falling for you")
Your story didn't catch me hook,line and sinker...I jumped in the goddamned boat and screamed "I'm yours"...loves it we do, precious...+D Ginstar

plz update this as soon as possible

Mha, Cora's gonna freak when she wakes up isnt she. I bet anyone of us would love to be in her position right now.

ROTL!!

Aayway, please update soon!

XD this story is really amazing ^^ I cannot wait for the next one

Good chapter, but I have to say I am like Cora in the slow developing relationship department.

Yay... You can never rush genius.

Oh Darren you ebil man you. Everytime I think, yeah thats ebil enough, he manages to do one more thing to really show off he's the ebilest.
I'm hoping Audrey is going to go commando (not the underwear kind) and hold out agaisnt some xeno's then team up with the predators and Cora and Andre and take out Darren together but at the last minute she does something stupidly heroic and dies for everybody, there in, making up for being a villains pawn.
Cora is going to wake up in bed with a semi-naked predator. I'm going to thoroughly enjoy that moment. Couldn't Sorus at leats of wrapped her in something? I suppose she'll forgive him anyway, she's to nice not to.
Would be kind of sweet if they get back to the ship and find Andre all smoochy with her predator friend.
Lots of things I want. Hopefully I'll get one or two of them.

How many times can I tell you that I love this story? I want to smack Cora for being so dense. lolz. I loved the detail of his ship...excellent. Oh have I told you how much I love this story...love love love

Sorus to the rescue. Im wondering how he's going to get her in a hospital, or maybe she'll be able to walk in herself. Im imagining him climbing through the window like robin hood..lolz
love love love love keep it coming

I have to say this is a really nice story. I love it, there isn't to many good AVP stories out there either. It's nice to see one every once in a while. Though I think you should add a little more romance in there, but that's just me. It's really nice overall. Keep up the good work!

Yay... It is finally here. You know I like taking it slow in a relation ship, but my god... how slow is she. I am saying this in a not-trying-to-be-mean-but-sorta-half-to-kinda-way.

For some reason this chapter had me humming the theme to 'Love boat'.
Ah, young confused and unexplained to one another love. Isn't it a beautiful thing? Maybe Cora will find a man friend on the desert planet and Sorus will get grumpy and throw him out a window. Then Cora will yell at him and he'll feel lousy. No so good, but then he can get all angry and yell tis ebcause he 'loves' her and she'll be so astonished she'll swoosh into his arms and they can run awya into the night.
Yeah, that would be a nice fairy tale kind of ending but its not going to happen. I expect alien vs. predator fights! Ebil Darren laughing manically whilst flame throwering at predators before a stray alien sneaks up behind him and skewers him. Then everybody can run away with one another. (This is my imagiantion whirling at 2:45am)

Nice, long informative chapter. A lot went on really. I really like Sorus' ship and the sharing a bed bit was very cute. I hope Cora gets well soon though. Are we going to hear about Andre anytime soon to? I already miss her presence.

Great chapter! and I support fast-ish updates.

Hi,

I'm enjoying your story! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it coming.

Wow.

:)

Reading your fiction, I have to come to an understanding that your story is utterly awesome. The cute fluttering romance sparking between the species was truly adorable and sweet, but not too overly dramatic that it completely tarnished the lovely plot. And while still maintaining cool fighting scenes, and moments of deeply described emotions, you are really talented, there is no doubt about that.

Sure, there were moments when I got bored and tended to skip the bits and pieces about some person name Darren and another named Audrey, but don't stop entering those scenes.

Thanks for a really good fiction, I've enjoyed reading this, and don't disappoint, m'kays?? I'm looking forward to the next awesome chapter and the others to follow :)

-Miss Masquerade.