yay! i am so happy she snapped out of it! if she didn't... this would be a very boring story... but it's not! it is awesome!!

I very much enjoyed Zuko and Irohs appearance in this chapter- especially Iroh. The whole scene where he 'decodes' the song seems like something he would know how to do. I have to admit, though, it seems like Yui has picked up some rather unstable assets.

The Xin Wan's music box is a trigger for something in Yui's memory? Intriguing chapter.

so what is going to happen to ichiro?!?! please post soon!

This is really, really well written. I think the creepiness is going to stay with me for a while...

Poor, poor fire nation family. I have a feeing what happens to their firebender brother wont be nearly as nice as what happens to them. Which is a pretty horrible thought.

Creepiest line out of the story? "Xin Wan is so happy he's got children to love and adore." That ender was a perfect cap to the whole freakiness factor. Like, it sounds innocent, but in the context it's given in, it becomes evil.

that was really creepy/good... not many people like/read OC stories... but i do!