Please update soon its been a year and its a really good story :)

Oooh, I liked it! I love the idea of Eragon and Murtagh finally bring able to be brothers, and the fact that Eragon has two dragons! It's sad though, what happens to them when they're so young...Anyway please update soon!

That was GREAT! good job, intresting to have 2 dragons hatch and it was great to see the close relationship between murtagh and eragon. Top writing well done.

i like the idea of the story plz update soon

thats a relief to "read", this is something I cannot wait to read more of! :] good job! and heres to more updates!

I like this, it is very interesting. A bit of proof reading is in order though. Will you be continuing it? I hope you are.

Great Idea love it! Keep writing!

very very good...i can't wait to read more...plz update soon!

LOVED IT!

Really good!

Wow! This was REALLY good! Please Update Soon! I can't wait for more! :]

- Emberseve

I really like this story so far and your writing style is amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next.

It is a great story, please don't castrate me. No seriously it is really well written, can't wait for more.

that was definitely an alternate universe. haha and very nicely written too, if only the circumstances were different. oh well, had to stick to the original story somehow. the only fault i could find were the grammatical errors interspersed in some parts and a couple of linking verbs were missing in a few sentences. i just wondered why some of the sentences didn't make any sense, a word or two may have been missing when you encoded it. anyway, the story as a whole was very good. nice one dude. _ 3

i happen to like the idea off this story and hope you caintinue it. this story could go really far. if done right it could go on in to a series