I gotta agree, I would have liked to read a little more about that relationship between them. You wrote it really well. Thanks for writing it!

Absolutely loved this!
And I'd definitely like to add my voice to those asking about a sequel/continuation.

Well, damn. Was not expecting that! But it was a happy surprise. Kudos for doing something totally different and doing it really well!

I'm not sure if this would discourage or encourage the Nate/Eliot shippers out there, lol. If you have any familiarity with the Supernatural fandom, you'll understand why the thought amuses me so.

But thats neither here nor there. Great story! :)

Awesome! I love this! The idea is both brave and origional, and you do an excellent job writing it. And the last line is hilarious! =D How much do I have to beg and/or bribe for sequels? I'd really like to see about the rest of the crew finding out... And how Nate and Eliot deal with the change in their relationship, particularly when working a job... Gee, my brain is sparking with ideas that I'd love to see you write, so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more! It's a great story!

This is fantabulous. I would never think of Nate being Eliot's father, but now that you have written it I can totally see it!
Great job, love the last couple o' lines.

hm interesting twist. i'm curious to see where ya go with this. i like the twist.

That, I didn't expect. Nice twist, but who's his mother?
BTW, are you still interested in doing the role play?

hi! i just wanted to say, WOW. i was totally not expecting that at all. it's a very interesting twist on the relationship between eliot and nate. i don't any other author BUT you could have actually pulled that off so that it worked. like, legitimately WORKED. that was...incredible! the third to last paragraph, when it all comes together, was like a punch in the gut for me! it totally knocked the wind out of me, and i was pretty much sitting there stupidly blinking at the computer for a couple of minutes going, HuH?!?!? ...and then after a few minutes, it hit me, and i (literally) screamed, I GET IT! WHOA! THIS IS AWESOME! (you can ask my brother and sister for proof! they were looking at me a little strangely after that...) O.o it was INCREDIBLE!
i'd really REALLY like to see more of this new dynamic between nate and eliot. it's an AMAZING idea, and i for one would REALLY love to see how this goes! i love it! *squees*

*Massive bear hug tackle glomp of DOM!*
i love this!
thank you so freaking much for sharing this with us! :] you rock my universe!
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