I'm uncertain as to who to feel more sorry for, Edgeworth...or Maggey.

This was hilarious and wonderful and I can't wait to keep reading. Your characterizations are golden.

I think that was the funniest intercourse I read between Phoenix and Edgeworth. XD

C-A

I somehow feel sorry for Trucy, if THAT is the most romantic thing she ever heard.

C-A

Oh, Trucy. I adore Thee.

And to read Miles so...slutty... That's both amusing, sad, infuriating... Makes me want to slap him and hug him and roll around on the floor and laugh and...and... *sigh*

Stupid Miles! You still love Pheenie, and he still loves you!

Go fix stuff!

You're so taken with "The Truth"... Get your Pheenie back!

I love this story.

XD

God, I love this.

I adore Trucy! THAT'S the most romantic thing she's ever heard?

...Well, ok. It WAS adorably romantic, but...not in a way little girls should know about. How old is she here?

Ah, dang it. I actually forgot I was reading a memory in the middle and felt all sad when I realised. Good job. On to the rest!

Hehehe!

This was simply AMAZING.

I couldn't stop giggling.

Great job.

okay, hobo Phoenix is amazing (needed to be anounced) and lol he offered Edgey grape juice. My friends and I still aren't over the grape juice...and WOW, Trucy has no tact at all. Not like she had any in the game but...wow, Nick, how have you been raising your kid? I love this. It's cute and it makes me laugh.

That was one of the funniest, angsty, along the lines of realistic but also not, story ever!

So glad Klavier and Apollo are a couple in this story(they lack fanfics...), it made so much funnier and just plain awesome!

I spent most of the story going "When's Edgey gonna find out Klavier is dating his 'Forehead'?"

Nice ending too lol!

Very good story-I enjoyed reading it. One thing you might want to fix is in chapter 8. I think It should be "Je t'aime" for the name of the resturant. Sorry to be a bother but I figured you'd want to correct it.

Ah, angersex for the win. I love Phoenix at the end. Could we try hating eachother again?

Should she really have that? No. No she shouldn't. Ah, I love it. Trucy drunk would be so funny. As always, I love your story. Apollo and Klavier are perfect for eachother.

...aw... I think...

...Great angry sex...