Oh my gosh, this is brilliant! I am very much looking forward to reading more!

I came acros this story a few weeks back and I'm hooked! I'm very curious as to where you're gonna take this and please, please update because it's looking to be a very interesting story!

This is such a cool idea! And written really well. I can't wait to find out how it all pans out, with Clark acting so differently to usual. Not to mention Lois living in the same house as Clark, with all his powers!

Great chapter.
Maybe it will become a little difficult in the future for Clark having known Lois when he was just a teenager.

Really great story!
Please continue, I'm enjoying it so much!
I would give constructive criticism, but I can't think of anything to criticize.

wonderful story i hope for an update soon :)

Wait a moment, how old is Lois? And Clark is still a teenager! Falling for him is completely wrong!

WOW!
This is turning into a very very interesting story...
Please continue when you can...
I really want to see how this turns out. :)

An intruiging couple of opening chapters. Love the way you create atmosphere (and the mid-western twang is gold!). Can't wait to see where you take this.

why do you abhor this chapter? I really like where this is going. Dont abhor, continue, update, write.

I love time travel stories! So she's in 1959, and doesn't know (well kinda does) that Clark is Superman. I'm assuming that she's older, in her 40s? If she's 8 in '59, that would make her be born in 50 or 51, and her having a cell phone would put her at least in the early to mid 90s, which then according to when she'd be born, she'd be in her 40s and most likely (if you're following canon of some sort) married to Clark..unless there's more time travel involved :)I can't wait to see where this goes!

The last sentence of the second chapter had me LOL! `She´d pulled a Marty McFly.´ Indeed!

The second boy in the car seems to be Pete Ross, very much like comic canon describes him.

Now we have a big age difference between Clark and Lois - and a Clark who is not Superman yet, but on his way to his destiny. I just hope this is nothing like the TV show `Smallville´. I´m very much looking forward to reading more of this story! Please update soon, I put you on my author alert list!

You left me wondering - different time? or different universe?

Please update!

Ok, I just love this!
Lois tranfered to another time, with an obviously totally different Clark (or so she thinks). Such great potatial for upcoming chapters.

great start, very intriguing :)

can't wait for more to see wat is going on. is lois in the past or an alternate universe? or something else entirely?