I had tears in my eyes when I read this. I want to knwo what happens next, how the other pilots reacted to his death, and if they will see him again.

Interesting story so far, it'll be fun to see where this goes.

Update soon please! *begs*

Hey, this was really cool. Seems really strange for you to have to kill Dou for your story, though. Looking forward to your update.

uh... ur fic is really hard to understand ya know... and will tsuzuki and hisoka appear in this fic?

nice fic, realy nice. erm, it was from like two -years- ago but could you try to continu it anyway? ; thank you very much

Well? If there's gonna be more, where is it? Hurry up and update! I wanna see who Duo pisses off/blows up next!

I love stories that make Duo a real Shinigami! _ I can't wait for the next part. *glances at post date* There IS going to be more... right?

Wow...this is really good. _I especially enjoyed your characterization of Duo...very un-stereotypical, i liked the way you wrote his thought processes, and his relationship with Hilde. Please continue, I wanna see what Duo does in the Meifu _ And randomly, what war did Rafe die in, Vietnam? And I'm guessing that your districts span the whole world,not just Japan, am I correct? And are we gonna see YnM series charas show up sometime? May the muses be with you!

Wow, this looks like it's going to turn out to be a great series! That is, if you update it again... it's been nine months already! *pout* But anyways, I love your writing style. It flows very well, and you get the character's emotions across nicely. It's a great idea, too. I really hope you write more of this, and I'll definately be checking back on this fic!

Wowowowowowowowowowowow! I love the way you wrote Duo. so talented, ne. Man. Loved it! Loved it! Wirte more quick and soon! Please. I really enjoyed this... Thanks! And You really captured what we all love about Duo... And your explanation was good, too. Thanx.

This was amazing. It made my day! The beginning is

halarious! I love the way you interpreted Duo's character!

The high-tech information was so cool...This was just fun! _

You are an amazing writer; I don't think I can stress this enough. The clarity, facility and glibness of your words cuts through even my Zyrtec-induced haze. I really like this fic - it's genuinely interesting, and golly what a plot... Fics with PLOT - fics that aren't just one character mooning over another - seem to be rarer and rarer nowadays, so I really appreciate this. Not to mention - Yami no Matusei and Gundam Wing? Fanfic-combo of Champions. How much better can you get? _ I can't wait until the rest of the Shinigami show up. Oh, by the way, I assume Rafe is an original character? He's cool. _ I love your characterization of Duo... Please write more soon! Pretty please?

only you could pull off the God of Death as dead and make that seem reasonable. Once again you have piqued my interest in a new series. Guess its back to the anime shop for me. Have always loved Duo. he's beautiful. sigh. Does this mean he's single? Thanks for the tale and if he needs a not so corpral girlfriend, feel free to write me in. I could play the dead chick for the right boy, Say one with long hair, a big gun and a thing for robots. thanks for the fun. waiting for more. zeo.

Hiya! Sorry about the delay- I'm writing, I'm writing! I promise! And yes, Tsuzuki will be in it...

Mmmmm... Tsuzuki? please?