Wow, that was really good.
This scene should have been in the game xD

Definitely a good read. Good visualization and choice of words. It was naughty but not dirty; sensuous but not slutty.

Reading this was a real treat.

I think you've kept them well within character as well! Good job!

This was great! I love it! xD

I, too, wish that this scene would've made the game as well. ^^

whohohohoi! This was good!
loved it...

I wonder why they did turn down the idea Nojima proposed... hehe

Cheers:) KT

I love this!
Why didn't this scene stay in the game ;_;

Goddamn them. They should have had that scene in there. It would have made it so much more fun.

But this was nice. Well-written, and characterization was pretty good.

great job