Did you forget to update?

Ok check everyday for update. Well done on writing

Ok, waiting for another update for a short chapter. I love this story but would love to read more in between thanks

well done again, really hope you'll keep going with it... much enjoyed this chapter, i just love getting the other perspective. looking forward to seeing what happens with the ski mini break... and more...

good work, much enjoyed

I absolutely adore this. It's refreshing to have the story from Mark's POV and I love how you've mingled the book, film and your own imagination so creatively. You've a wonderful grasp of language to make the words and expressions flow effortlessly. Mark is very much in-character too; something which I find is quite tricky to get right. Please continue.

Enjoyed this chapter v. much. Poor, silly Mark.

Please say chapter 10 is on the way

loved it! i think you should take your time writing the story - thats how you'll keep the excellent quality of the story going! hopefully you'll finish it - but do it on a time scale that suits you - dont worry about others! =D

Dammit, I had a review all written, then I lost it.

To recap:

Anyway, very fine part, IMHO. Very enjoyable. I felt Mark's thoughts were very true to character. I for one am content for you not to rush it!

As for not posting works in progress, it's not about willpower, but it's about a.) my tendency to go back and make changes at the beginning when I get to the end and b.) I don't (usually) like to read works in progress, so I don't like to do that to other people.

I am sorry your story is wonderful. But I am getting tired of pumped up to read one chapter and then have to wait a month or two for the next. Very frustrating. Why don't you finish your story like Sandra Faith does hers?

very well done, you are doing such a great job. can't wait for the next one. again, it's wonderful to see such a well constructed and lovely development of mark's character, and all the little details you pick up on are just great.

can't wait for more and more!

Well done you !! Hope that you continue on with this - dont let your readers wsit to long a bit for the next install will you. Yes, I agree they would be chasing each other around the flat leading to um, how lovely.

Oh god this is GOOD!
SO, So Good!
Mark is completely in character as is Bridget, but Mark... WOW!
I can actually hear Colin Firth voice while I was reading this.
Please Update as soon as you can.
Wonderful Job!

Loved the observations about seeing Bridget on the lake--how she'd been on her best behaviour up to that point around him... very astute. Love Mark's contemplations.

'Lobster'. *Sigh*!

I love the way his Mom knows him. I also like the fact that Mark (like Bridget) appeases his parents. The ring was charming additon. Please update soon!