Hehe, this was a nice introspective piece. Again, only a few grammatical errors, and considering how old this is, that's impressive!

Cheers,

-Manna

After deciding I needed to escape from reality for a short time while I have a small break, I found my self going back to some of the first G Gundam stories on this site.

Your stories are truly some of the best. I thought that I had reviewed this one but obviously I hadn't. Anyhow, I loved this fic of yours and enjoyed how you explained everything in this espisode from how Rain figured that Domon had gone to see Chibodee to how the Neo-Japan fighter fell a sleep later in the hotel; trusting Rain enough to let himself fall into a deep sleep. Oh, and I liked how to spoke of their little nod to each other about the fight.

I wish I was more familiar with the other animes you write fics on because I'm sure your work there is great as well. Keep it up!

that was awesome!

I know it's been forever and a day since you wrote and posted this, but I write this in the hopes that you might still see this, and that if you do, it'll bring a smile to your face . To get to the point, I liked it very much. You remained realistic, but managed to convey a sort of quiet sentimentality within the scene. A nice take on the Domon/Rain relationship, and one that kept both in character. I'm incredibly glad that you shared this on the site.

Peace, love, & blueberry jello,

-Edi-

I really liked this story. It has an original setting, for no one has ever thought of that time in New York. You really got Rain's thoughts and feelings in this fic. GOOD JOB! _

Awww...that was so sweet! _ Omg, I just love ur fics! They're so awesome! Keep it up! Yeah, u better. lol j/k _

Great! So...this was your very first G Gundam fanfic hu? It's a really good one in my oppion! Well, till I read another one of your fanfics, z ya!

Hahaha, I finally am going in and reading all these old fanfics and reviewing them!

Anyway. Bery, very impressive for the first 'fic in a genre! I generally don't even write fanfiction about anime until I've seen at least 1/2 of it, for accuracy reasons, but MAN! This was great! This is another fine example of your great writing, DBC!

Very good for your first G fic, ever. I like how you've progressed through the Domon/Rain relationship in all the stories I've read thus far, although Valentine remains my absolute favorite. ;) I hope this ends up being just one of many G fics you write; you have a talent with words, I'd certainly love to see more G Gundam fanworks around. _

*eyes get all starry* A G GUNDAM FANFIC! YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES! *coughs* Ok. Awesome fic, but I think Rain may have gotten her degree... after all, in episode 7 they sure act like she's a qualified doctor. Still, I loved it! Write more! Rebel against the confines of Japan-only anime! Btw, I've seen every episode except for the last two (but I know what happens now!) so just let me know if you have any questions.

Actually, AC stands for "After Colony" And Gundam Wing takes place in the After Colony century. The G Gundam Fanfic goes here.

DBC, this is Gwen from BBA (;p), and I wanted to say you've got a great story! I have yet to see G Gundam, but from what I have read, you've made me more eager to see it! Keep on writing!

I thought it was _okay_ but I should tell you that the other gundam section is labled 'gundam wing/AC' the 'AC' standing for alternate century which includes G gundam, gundam x, as well as gundamW and turn A gundam... okay, I'll shut up now.

Well, this is the first G fic I saw here, and it's about time! The portrayal of Rein was dead-on. Keep on writing more good stories!

P.S. Did I mention that I'm overjoyed that G Gundam fics are actually being written?