i like them alot

Fantastic...again! Good luck at University!

Asha

Aw that was sad. I loved the first one, theres not enough about Johna nd Ina in this world XD I loved the second one too, regaurdless how short, I loved it. Third was funny =]And the last was sad, but my favorite. All in all this has to be my favorite chapter =] update soon!!

Wonderful. Command was fantastic! :D

Good Luck! And this was lovely :)

Luck wished! Lol, I feel sorry for Alex. Not only did Ian miss his birthday, he also has to go ballroom dancing! My Mom forced me to do ballroom dancing a while ago. It was... pretty terrible actually... Alex's reaction is justified! :)

The ending was ouch, but excellent nonetheless.
I loved it. ;D
This was amazing :D

-Kay

I'm packing to just go home, but, well, considering this now has my mother in the mix, I know the feeling.

Anyway, I'd say more, but I have little computer time left, so I'm just going to say 'awesome', and I can't wait for next month's. ^_^

Alex/Sabina forever!

Very nice.

aww...the last part was really cute! And this entire thing was really good...what's up with Yassen? UPDATE SOON!

TheNotedMusician

It worked!

Hi again! It's me. Am just trying to work out the whole 'add to favourites' thing. Er...really liked the story. Yes...

This is fantastic! I really love all the little scenes and you write really well. The dialog you use is very natrual and not forced.

I especially like the scene in the headmaster's office when Alex is twelve. The essay title was a really clever way to make Alex and Ian's relationship evem more awkward.

I think it would be really interesting if we saw his as an old man. What would he regret? Oh I get all excited when I think of an idea! Please continue with this soon! It's fantastic!

Asha =D

"She reached a hand forward and laid it on his shoulder. "I'm not leaving you, Alex."

But she was still leaving."

Ow. Just - ow.

I love protective!Alex in Family. He's very... well, heart-warming. :D

"Of all the things MI6 doesn't do for you, couldn't they at least pick up your shopping?"

lol. I like the relationship you drew between them, there. Alex needs someone who knows about his work. ^_^

Your Yassen was quite good. Though, as Nyxie said, it's really all up to interpretation. (I like your interpretation. :D)

I think the Denial one was my favorite, Jack needing to leave and not leaving Alex, but Alex feeling like that, anyway.

The Eyes one, I'm a little iffy on. I can't exactly say whether or not you got Yassen's character 'right', because ultimately, apart from being guarded, but ruthless, we don't really know much about him. Most everything is up to interpretation.

That being said, I think Yassen's character was somewhat overtly-cryptic, in the way he talked. It fits your interpretation well, though...but, again, we don't really see much of Yassen in it - the focus seems to be Alex. In the end, I can't really say much because there isn't much to go on.

Now, the Family one I absolutely loved, too. Alex's determination, even 'fighting' with Elizabeth Pleasure over his life and all that, was excellent. Her worry that Alex would end up like his parents, and Alex's past driving him to make sure it doesn't, is an excellent form of emotional characterization. (And lord, if that kind of wording doesn't make me sound pretentious? :D) Also loved the 'conman/spy/government intelligence agent' thing.

And the Hunger thing seemed both angsty and sweet at the same time, even if you (as I think) may have just been intending for sweet.

Love this prompt. Can't wait 'til next month! ^_^