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Reviews for: My Lie to Keep
kendrat199
2009-07-01 . chapter 2
I will always hold my preference for Remy/ororo, but I did love this story. Consider this review a combination of one of this chapter and the previous one. I ♥ how Logan thinks he can just leave Ororo and be happy enough to let her go, while it's killing him. I nearly cried when I read that she kept smiling and danced and made jokes. It nearly broke my heart! It probably didn't help to have that song either. Uch! I'd slap Logan for what he did, but any of my other pairings-Scott or Remy- would've done the same thing to "protect" Ororo. Ororo is a warrior's woman. Her determination and loyalty is as hard as Emma Frost's diamond form!

Thank you for the nice conclusion! That whole Ororo crying in her loft and tricking all her friends (even Remy, which I don't believe for a minute!) to believe that she was fine about Logan leaving, did not bode well with me.

So glad, we have the rolo team again! I smirked so widely as Logan stood back to back with Ororo in a fighting stance. And when he had asked what a beautiful girl like her was doing in a seedy place like this, I nearly laughed out loud :]

He's cute!
-kendra <3
NancyT
2009-06-05 . chapter 2
OOh, how I love how you keep the stories coming, I can never get enough of 'em... And this surely is no exception! Just Brilliant work here, and just so typical of Logan running away because of his fears and yeah this second part was definitely needed!

More!
T'ChallaOroro
2009-05-11 . chapter 2
I am glad you wrote the second chapter it gave it closing. It had intersting twist that I did not expect. It was a good read and I hope you write more.
WrapMeInYourArms
2009-05-09 . chapter 2
Two stellar thumbs up!
cabrera1234
2009-05-08 . chapter 1
awesoem story ^_^
Nienna Rose
2009-05-08 . chapter 2
Pretty damn good story w/a way better ending!! Cool.
Nienna Rose
2009-05-08 . chapter 1
So you were going to not write anything new & work on your African story but you keep doing new stuff anyway. In a way that's good & in a way it isn't because I want African Skies finished but this was really good D & I liked the ending w/Logan being happy for her.
ToughSpirit
2009-05-08 . chapter 2
OMG. That was a really great story. I love rolo, I could never stop loving this couple. Again great story.
aiRo25
2009-05-08 . chapter 2
Very sweet -- and necessary! I love your stories, Darlin!
WrapMeInYourArms
2009-05-07 . chapter 1
Thumbs up, sad but good.
aiRo25
2009-05-07 . chapter 1
Yackers! You two lumbering idiots! I just want to...ooh! Well, :calming down: they'll figure it out. Another excellent fic, even if I HATE their deliberate obliviousness that either of them could have fixed. VERY well written.
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