 KK the Prophet 2009-11-27 . chapter 7They should've made a Harp Noise in the game. Only problem is what element would it be.
Poor Gallant. He was misguided and loyal to the end. |
 ?????????? 2009-11-24 . chapter 7 *Sigh* Forget about the SL 3 Special. Try put SL: StarForce Double and try add as many character from Megaman Battle Network series 1-6 (the final boss also) include the special event after the game is beaten. Just put the evil Netnavi's not good. Try the Megaman X series from the Megaman X Collection (the Whole series into one game in gamecube) all the boss like Magma Dragoon, Flame Mammoth, Vile, Gravity Beetle, and Sigma (add his new form from all the series). If you noticed that all the boss had the same name from classic to new version like Armored Armadillo from Megaman X (classic) to new version to the Megaman X Maverick Hunter (the new version of Armored Armadillo with new armor), I would say that would be Defense Release of his new transformation. If you could think of this romance story for Geo and Sonia against the whole Megaman series boss and his Double Noise Change try think of how it begin with his Double Noise Change. |
 ZeUbermensch 2009-11-08 . chapter 7I never played Megaman Starforce (Fully). The Attacks and actions were a bit vague as in; ' “Hey Mega, how about we crash the party?” MegaMan said as SonicSword formed again. '
I know Sonic Sword's a sword, but elaborate. Anyways, Nice story mate. |
 ?????????? 2009-11-07 . chapter 7 I forgot something, the name of half+half noise form will be Double Noise Change. It depend which form Geo will choose his left form + right form. Also include the Double Multi Noise Change will be later chapter if you can think of one. For Rogue Noise form, I dont know about that. |
 ?????????? 2009-11-07 . chapter 7 I have a perfect idea for ur new story. SL Special, it's about Megaman new noise form half+half like GeminiWolf or CorvusLibra also the element will be half+half like Elec/Fire or Wood/Null. Left will be Black Ace version + right side be Red Joker version. The Finalize be half also, even the NFBs element of half will combine. Try think of new villians name from SL3 the mystery guy will be in SL Special. I'd say it will happen after SL3 + GxS birth of their child. |
 Taeniaea 2009-11-06 . chapter 7cool chapter |
 MEgAaMutO123 2009-11-04 . chapter 6good chapter, keep up the good work! |
 Poketoa 2009-11-03 . chapter 6Nice. And I have two very good guesses about Mr. Shadow there. Heh heh heh. Tight communities get predictable, I guess. Lol.
But I'm wrong. Heh...
Either way, I sense an OC.
And no continuity errors! Yays! |
 Poketoa 2009-10-14 . chapter 5Lol, Bass. Glad to see you're back...
“Geo…thank you. For everything…you’ve showed me to follow my heart and to strive for my dream…that’s why…I was wondering if you could become my brother…” Sonia spoke to him.
“I should kind of thank you really…you’ve…helped me in more ways than one…” he said as he placed his transer near her guitar as it registered their brotherband.
^Plot error here though, I recorded all conversations in MMSF1 and it goes like this...
Sonia: Thank you for coming today. And for helping me move on.
Geo: I'm sure your mom was watching too...
Sonia: Yeah... Well, it's time for me to go. I've got to try and make
it by myself now. ...*sob*... Wh-Why am I crying...? I told
myself... I have to be strong... *sob* *Begins crying*
Geo: What's wrong!?
Mega: Ack! She's crying! I saw on a TV show recently that on Earth,
it's a crime to make a woman cry! Hurry up and do something before we
get arrested!
Geo: Do something? She's already decided to live on her own... What
can I do?? ...
Kelvin (Geo's memories): Anything you can't solve on your own, can be
overcome with the help of a friend. Other people can make us stronger,
and we can give other people strength, too. If every person on this
planet were connected by BrotherBands, we'd all live in a wonderful world where we could support each other.
Geo: (I wonder if I can stop her tears... by becoming Brothers with
her...?)
KelvinGM: Other people can make us stronger, and we can give other
people strength, too.
Geo: But... But I... What can I...? ...
Kelvin(GM[?]): Be brave, Geo!
Geo: (...Dad...)
Sonia: *hiccup, hiccup* *sniffle*
Geo: Uh, um... So... Um... Please become Brothers with me!!
Sonia: *hiccup*... *sniffle*... ... ...OK.
Sonia: *done crying* I guess I should get going...
Geo: Are you going to be OK?
Sonia: Yeah, I'll be OK. I'll be OK from now on because we're
connected. Now I have something to remind me I'm not all
alone in this big world. I can stop worrying about that
starting today!! I have to work hard to find the new me. I'm sure you
can find a new you, too, Geo!! Let's both work hard at it!
Geo: O-OK... Ah! And remember, you can't tell anyone about my secret!
Sonia: The one about the alien living in your Transer? Well, no one
would believe me even if I did!!
Voice(Robert the Copper): Whoa!! What is with these Z waves!?
*Geo and Sonia turn toward the man who interrupted their moment*
Geo: Somehow, I think that guy would. Man, this is bad. There's no way
to escape...
Sonia: Lyra! Let's go! Hai-ya!
Bob: *KO*
Sonia: OK, I'm really going this time! I'll contact you later, OK? And
thank you... ...for everything.
Geo: Uh...
Lyra: We'll meet again, Mega. It's almost like we're going steady...
Almost. Hee hee.
*Sonia walks away*
Geo: Huh!? Can a BrotherBand really do that?
Mega: Don't ask me! You just HAD to go and become Brothers, huh?
But your way works too. Lol...
Other than the plot mismatch, WOOT YOU'RE BACK, and this chapter worked perfectly. |
 Omegaxis1 2009-10-08 . chapter 5finally updated, huh. good story either way. hope u update the other stories as well especially "mistake" |
 ?????????? 2009-10-08 . chapter 5 You know I waited too long to read chap 5. I'll give you some ideas for the next chap. When the battle between 2 lover Sonia beat Geo up really bad, Geo try to get the real Sonia back, but Sonia kill Geo, Ace + others were shock then the real Sonia grab Geo wrist + some tears comes out + the dark Sonia came out reveal the true form inside Sonia (think of a name), Sonia heal Geo + ready for the final battle. Try put some years later about their marriage time, family reunion, and their children. |
 sheltie 2009-08-24 . chapter 4good chap can't wait for the next one |
 anon 2009-08-23 . chapter 4 this is for all 4 chapters of this one:I've read all your fanfics, and i liked them all, except this one, this one really seemed to ** me off, maybe it was the random out of nowhere depression at the start, or the fact yo turned sonia evil, but it makes me want to rage, i am disappointed. |
 PegasusNoize 2009-08-16 . chapter 4 Wow, Ace and Tia had sex already, wow, i could learn stuff XD |
 Poketoa 2009-08-16 . chapter 4Nicely done. :D
Well... I suggest adding an extra space between location switches... Makes it a bit easier to tell what exactly you're looking at... XD
Hm. Your writing is gaining power. BASSDS grew to LV 80! |
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