Good summary, it sounded different from the rest. Not just 'oh the zombies are coming, here, blood and gore!' I think we all know that's kind of quaranteed when reading a Dawn of the Dead fic.

I also liked the first chapter, it was easy to read and kept me interested. However, I couldn't help noticing you had quite many errors there. You should consider getting a beta. We are all a little bit blind to our own writing and something always slips past.. For example here:

"She has a lot of patients so she wouldn’t mind waiting for that to happen." (from the very end of this chapter)

I think you mean to say that she has a lot of patience :) Otherwise the sentence starts to look quite weird ;)

Another great chapter to another great story.

Cello, I finally got to read your newest chapter-It's been a madhouse of paper work for me these past couple of months. Sigh... anyway, nice new chapter. I'm glade to see that their surviving through the town. I wonder who the one survivor is that Bobbi as a history with. I haven't seen zombieland yet, lack of funds. Hopefully I'll be able to either rent or buy the DVD. If I'm really lucky I can see it in theaters (here's to crossing my fingers). I can hardly wait for the next chapter. ^_^

Nice imagery. ^_^ Well, I'm off to my next class. Update soon-k.

Hey, I got around to reading you're new chapter. It's hard to type with a wristebrast on...so I'll keep it short and sweet. ^_^ Great job, and hope to hear from you soon.

I'm sad. This chapters over and I can't wait for the next one. Ryan and bobbi r a great duo. Update soon!

interesting start. i like the relationship between the two characters. update soon

Hey, this sounds like a great start. I hope to read new chapters soon. ^_^

glad to see your writing again. i loved your other stories and i know im gonna love this.

I was enjoying this story so much I forgot that the zombies were coming! Glad to see you back!

Another and very awesome story. Though I hope Ryan actually lives at the very end unlike Bianca and Matt.

nice! I liked your other stories and this one is no exception. I like it :D. Update soon

Love it keep it going.