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Midnight-Rose-Dew
2009-08-21 . chapter 34
It over. So sad so very sad. Not that the chapter was sad. It was awesome. Well you better keep up your writing since if you stop I'll be very sad and angry. So bye
Cowgirls Angel Rita
2009-08-16 . chapter 34
New story yeah!

This story finished NO!

lol

i will vote.

Rita
BlueDragon123
2009-08-16 . chapter 34
To the one we call Doilan,

Not like you to be so cheesey. Not that I am complaining it was a great finish and you kept all your OC's alive (well almost all) Please write something new soon. I know it'll be great.

Blue:D
Little Miss Seaweed Brain
2009-08-16 . chapter 34
great story, great ending and yay...they all survived!!
Without Reprieve
2009-08-15 . chapter 34
I haven't reviewed this story in a while. Well, looks like it ended. Aerrow got his memories back, Dez betrayed the Storm Hawks, the Dark Ace has gone crazy, and Piper nearly died. Woah.
I liked the way you ended the story, telling how everyone's life had changed after the incident. Good job! :3
Tsuki-hime Neko
2009-08-15 . chapter 34
Great last chapter! Really good wrapping things up and I loved the flashback of Aerrow getting his memories back!

I wish it wasn't over though... :( But that's the sign of a story well written!
jenergy
2009-08-15 . chapter 34
NO! It can't the final chapter! *crying*

Jenergy
Little Miss Seaweed Brain
2009-08-12 . chapter 33
wow quite a bit of action there loving the story and am hoping to read the next chapter!
BlueDragon123
2009-08-12 . chapter 33
Go Dove! What do you mean that the website is working again. I can't read my own reviews. Nice chapter though. I like how you have turned the Dark ACe into a psyco.
Midnight-Rose-Dew
2009-08-11 . chapter 33
WOW That was just wow. That really all I know what to say. I can't belive that there only one more chapter. So sad. Now before I freak hurry up and update! Please.
Cowgirls Angel Rita
2009-08-11 . chapter 33
i more? that's it? aw man.

Nice to see that Aerrow returned. :D yay!

the dark ace stabed piper. is she gonna be okay?

lol

Rita
jenergy
2009-08-11 . chapter 33
lol. can't wait for the last chapter doilan. Great chapter. You think the last chapter will be longer?

JEnergy
Little Miss Seaweed Brain
2009-08-10 . chapter 32
thank youfor the new chapter, it really made my day...lolz :P
can't wait til the next one
Cowgirls Angel Rita
2009-08-08 . chapter 32
thank god that's only part one! if the battle was finished i probably would have been disapointed. ;) lol

i was wrong (again) oh well...(sigh) lol

i will try and update soon. i never seem to have enough time to type a chapter. and i get inturupted alot, if you know what i mean. it don't help that my dad is home now, but hes' leaving later today. (aw)

lol

Rita
BlueDragon123
2009-08-08 . chapter 32
I am very glad that this is not the final chapter. But still this is a horible cliffhanger. (It may be hypocritical but Dark Ace kicked Aerrow of a runway so I have a right to be mad)
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