 Midnight-Rose-Dew 2009-08-21 . chapter 34It over. So sad so very sad. Not that the chapter was sad. It was awesome. Well you better keep up your writing since if you stop I'll be very sad and angry. So bye |
 Cowgirls Angel Rita 2009-08-16 . chapter 34New story yeah!
This story finished NO!
lol
i will vote.
Rita |
 BlueDragon123 2009-08-16 . chapter 34To the one we call Doilan,
Not like you to be so cheesey. Not that I am complaining it was a great finish and you kept all your OC's alive (well almost all) Please write something new soon. I know it'll be great.
Blue:D |
 Little Miss Seaweed Brain 2009-08-16 . chapter 34great story, great ending and yay...they all survived!! |
 Without Reprieve 2009-08-15 . chapter 34I haven't reviewed this story in a while. Well, looks like it ended. Aerrow got his memories back, Dez betrayed the Storm Hawks, the Dark Ace has gone crazy, and Piper nearly died. Woah.
I liked the way you ended the story, telling how everyone's life had changed after the incident. Good job! :3 |
 Tsuki-hime Neko 2009-08-15 . chapter 34Great last chapter! Really good wrapping things up and I loved the flashback of Aerrow getting his memories back!
I wish it wasn't over though... :( But that's the sign of a story well written! |
 jenergy 2009-08-15 . chapter 34NO! It can't the final chapter! *crying*
Jenergy |
 Little Miss Seaweed Brain 2009-08-12 . chapter 33wow quite a bit of action there loving the story and am hoping to read the next chapter! |
 BlueDragon123 2009-08-12 . chapter 33Go Dove! What do you mean that the website is working again. I can't read my own reviews. Nice chapter though. I like how you have turned the Dark ACe into a psyco. |
 Midnight-Rose-Dew 2009-08-11 . chapter 33WOW That was just wow. That really all I know what to say. I can't belive that there only one more chapter. So sad. Now before I freak hurry up and update! Please. |
 Cowgirls Angel Rita 2009-08-11 . chapter 33i more? that's it? aw man.
Nice to see that Aerrow returned. :D yay!
the dark ace stabed piper. is she gonna be okay?
lol
Rita |
 jenergy 2009-08-11 . chapter 33lol. can't wait for the last chapter doilan. Great chapter. You think the last chapter will be longer?
JEnergy |
 Little Miss Seaweed Brain 2009-08-10 . chapter 32thank youfor the new chapter, it really made my day...lolz :P
can't wait til the next one |
 Cowgirls Angel Rita 2009-08-08 . chapter 32thank god that's only part one! if the battle was finished i probably would have been disapointed. ;) lol
i was wrong (again) oh well...(sigh) lol
i will try and update soon. i never seem to have enough time to type a chapter. and i get inturupted alot, if you know what i mean. it don't help that my dad is home now, but hes' leaving later today. (aw)
lol
Rita |
 BlueDragon123 2009-08-08 . chapter 32I am very glad that this is not the final chapter. But still this is a horible cliffhanger. (It may be hypocritical but Dark Ace kicked Aerrow of a runway so I have a right to be mad) |