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IudiciumViator
2010-01-04 . chapter 1
I just love the idea of this story; it's both funny, cute and touching!! One of the best DuoxWufei fics I've read ;)
Cinnamon Selkie
2009-11-04 . chapter 17
Love the warning--very to-the-point :)
~Peter had been a good friend both to him and to Meilan and it was obvious that Wufei was a bit sad that he couldn’t greet his friend like he wanted to.

Usually, it was easier for Wufei to pretend to be someone new.~
That's kind of sad :( Realistic, but sad.
Baby-Treize is adorable :)
~If you’re child was throwing up, you shouldn’t take them to the kindergarten. No. Really?~
*Giggles in sympathy*
~Jenny had turned out to be a very "girly" girl, much to Wufei's horror. She only played with dolls and things that were pretty. Everything, from her toys to her clothes and toothbrush had to be in bright, feminine colors.~
Oh I can just imagine. Poor Wufei.
~The hero, who was far too good looking to be working as a cleaner had gotten a hold of a magical medallion that was giving him magical, fighting skills that the hero used to fight evil. The medallion also appeared to help him lose his shirt over and over again.~
I love movies like that. They're so terrible that you don't have to worry about keeping track of the plot or any nonsense like that.
~“Thank you, it’s really pretty.” Wufei said, sounding completely sincere. “I’m going to take really good care of it and only wear it on special occasions.”

Jenny was almost vibrating in pride by the time Wufei was done with his praise and on his encouragement she ran off to make one for uncle Quatre.~
*Cries with laughter* Cinnamon.
shogi
2009-10-30 . chapter 17
Oh that was so awesome! Their family is beautiful and I adore them! Danielle was an interesting addition and my god! Jenny is just hilarious! Wufei having a daughter who is the epitome of what is considered 'feminine' is too ironic! But I loved the dynamics here.
Ooh, a reply at the bottom! Yay! LOL I'm actually still in my pjs, typing this up as fast as I can because I have to be at school in 30 minutes!! O_O
Thank you for a wonderful story!! Looking forward to more of your stories later! Excellent work!
Amy MizBlue
2009-10-09 . chapter 17
I was happy to see this chapter, because I loved this fic. It's very beautiful.

Hugs
zer0one
2009-10-07 . chapter 17
i just cant begin to tell you how much i love this fic, its so original, thw whole plot has a meaning and you CAN write, cant wait to read more from you!

i can say that this is the best fic i´ve read in a while.
princess cythera
2009-10-04 . chapter 17
aw, very cute :) i loved it :)
Cristalake
2009-10-02 . chapter 17
very nice epilogue. Very realistic.
StandingOnTheRooftops
2009-10-02 . chapter 17
I loved this chapter. A perfect ending. As a parent myself... that's exactly how I feel sometimes. And thanks for the newsflash on the pots. That was cute. And no... Jenny dosen't need to know *grins*.
Droaerion
2009-10-02 . chapter 17
Ahahaha, I did enjoy the pump. I was reading along and paused at that, it totally screamed awkward moment! and then they just shrugged it off, so it wasn't. Very amusing.

I couldn't believe you named one of the babies Treize. Totally snicker worthy, though at first I thought Treize was the name of Timmy's frog... Overall, I liked this last epilogue. It showed how even though their youthful excitement is gone, they're still there and in love... with a few winces. I found myself siding with Wufei more, about the corruption of the youth via commercialism. Wufei probably tried his hardest, but those Barbie commercials... they really hook the kids.
TanithNight
2009-10-02 . chapter 17
I loved this chapter. It felt so real. Their lives, the kids, and even their sex life. You can really sense the love that they share for one another.
BigSister2
2009-08-26 . chapter 16
Sorry it took me so long to get to this epilogue. My internet was out for a bit so I missed the update. I'm very glad I got to read this though. I absolutely love the fact that Meilan froze some of her eggs so now Duo can get what he really wants, if everything works out right that is. I like how you added the reactions of the friends and family, especially Duo's mom. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing the future of Duo and Wufei.
hugglesbunny
2009-08-06 . chapter 16
It never fails to amaze me how simply you handle this subject. It just flows out, like it's actually unfolding before me. Can't wait to see what's happening ten years from now...
HB
Mili Maxwell
2009-08-06 . chapter 16
xD yaayy! I was so happy to find the Epilogue today! *^* Thank u :D jijiji, read an epilogue is great because there is an explanation that the thinks that ended well continued well =D not like happy forever but n_n real and sweet(in the case of ur fic), I loved the last line --'So yeah, nature might have screwed up a thing or two, but they managed anyway.'-- ;D

xD I'll be waiting for the one shot x_x yeah...and for more of your awsome fics n__n I'm obsessed now xD
roses in bloom
2009-08-06 . chapter 16
My honest opinion? *Way* too short. :) But a good epilogue, nonetheless. I especially how you tied everything back to the title in that last sentence- very neat. Will definitely read the sequel! Good job on this one!
spider-jen
2009-08-06 . chapter 16
Yeah a sequel coming! I'm always sad to see the end, even though I'm dying for the get together
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