YES! I found it! I had read this story a few weeks ago, and then I wanted to reread it, but I couldn't find it! This just made my day(:

Very good :)

I like how Draco helps her in the end. I thought it was sweet, after all he did.

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He is a typical teenage boy in this till the end .. which was a sweet ending

What I Liked: the simplicity of the language, the episodic structure that hints at a deeper/developing relationship, your characterization of Asteria (also that you spell her name with an "e", it's so much prettier...and correct!)

What I Didn't Like: I don't really agree with your conception of Draco during his first few years at Hogwarts; I feel that as nasty of a boy as he is, he would treat other pureblooded children respectfully (the exception being the Weasleys, of course), especially if his parents know the family. You did a good job of writing this version of him, though, so kudos. :)

Short and sweet! I can't get enough of Asteria/Draco fiction. It's so interesting to think of how they ended up together, there are so many possibilities since we don't have details!

Though I don't think Lucius Malfoy would have got out of at least some time in Azkaban for all the crimes he committed!

BirdG-

As per your profile, I will leave you a constructive review instead of a "oh I like this!" one.

1) I am glad you spell her name with an 'e'. All this 'Astoria' nonsense is sort of driving me nuts.

2) I liked reading about your perception of Draco - how he nasty enough when he was young that he would be rude and bullying to ANY younger student, including students from his own house. That is a side of him that I hadn't thought about before. Very interesting to think about.

3) I like very much how you made simple moments like eating a Chocolate Frog or writing an essay on the Hogwarts grounds come alive. I could easily picture the places in my head, and the people were very much in character. This goes to show that good writers don't need huge exciting events to create a story - something as small as a Potter Stinks badge could be all it takes.

And now, I will tell you that I did like this very much. )

Wackysocks