 violetkitty02 2009-10-13 . chapter 8NO! There was no next button and I wanted there to be. Hope you can update again soon! |
 AlineDaryen 2009-08-25 . chapter 8This is the most interesting veela story I have come across lately! I liked the idea of clumsiness as a symptom of a bond and the cards and wings and, well, most of the little details. But the best thing is that you skipped the opening clichés about the change and complex Malfoy family trees, focusing simply on the attraction. And you don't make any of them behave in a silly or too girly way (yet), and that is really refreshing. I could do with longer chapters though... but if they come quickly I can manage, I guess :-)
Go on, please! |
 Micro chibi baka-san 2009-08-24 . chapter 7baka-san likes! this is like the best veela story I've read in a while! updte soon! |
 Shuga34 2009-08-24 . chapter 8Yay for a new Chapter!
Congratulations on Salem College. Both my mother and my sister attended there. |
 Beth5572 2009-08-24 . chapter 8I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
Thank you,
Terri |
 kura-wolfgoddess 2009-08-24 . chapter 8I believe this to be the most realistic, and one of the best, veela story ive read as of yet! I am greatly anticipating the next chapter and will most likely be a loyal fan from here on out! :P |
 TheBlackStrawberry 2009-08-23 . chapter 8Oh poor Harry loking everywhere for Draco, another wonderful chapter. Can't wait for the next. |
 kawanale 2009-08-23 . chapter 8ah, ah, ah, you're an evil author. a very, very evil author for writing that cliffhanger and leaving it like that. *pouts*
i know it's been a while and perhaps life is kicking you in the arse, but it was so good to see an update to this story!
looks like i'll need to be patient to find out why draco would slap his hand over his mouth and flee. then of course harry on the bed with his trousers off and naked on the bottom as can be, ehehe. |
 thrnbrooke 2009-08-23 . chapter 8Uh oh! What is wrong now? |
 X-Dressing Seme 2009-08-03 . chapter 7I am loving this unusual take on the whole veela story. Ypou are doing a wonderful job of avoiding cliches! Keep up the good work!! |
 La Mariane 2009-08-01 . chapter 7I discovered your fic thanks to the do_me_veela community on LJ.
I find it very interesting and I'm looking forward to Harry's conversation with Draco. I also wonder why Draco seems intent to reject Harry... it doesn't seem to be in their best interest. |
 TheBlackStrawberry 2009-07-24 . chapter 7I love the story, I hope you keep on writing. |
 buffypoynter 2009-07-18 . chapter 7yay finally updated :)
this chapter confirmed my suspicions, eagerly waiting to see the confrontation :D i liked the chapter personally :) |
 Alpea 2009-07-11 . chapter 7 Oh, I missed this fic!
Both veela and mate die if mate refuses to go with it? Well, that's quite an incentive there for Harry not to refuse ;) |
 Divyani 2009-07-11 . chapter 7Cliffhanger!! Gah.
I am enjoying this story so far and look forward to more. |