Nice scene expansion

oh I really liked this start to your little story. Please update again soon!

Excellente'! Are you going to continue? I hope you DO!

I love it. I absolutely love it.

that was good loved it

That was absolutely beautiful. Loved it. :)

Lovely- and I'd love to see you expand on Sweets. I think you'd do a great job with him.

nice story

wonderful!

for someone who english isnt a first language - this was written really well! I enjoyed it throroughly especially the ending - as it was your own. Really short, but the emotion you conveyed and the way you described their relationship - splendid!

woah, good work!

HawkAngel

aw loved it! i cried like a big baby in this ep lol it was so touching. the only downside was her not kissin' him b4 he went into the OR!

good fic cant wait for next thursday!