hey? Is this fic on a site called Anime palace in the trigun yaoi section? I could have sworn i saw it there...maybe i'm just going nuts...

WAH! THIS FIC IS SO CUTE! I heart midvalley (pet)

Holy eff, that was beautiful... and it worked so well as a song-fic becuase I could understand it without knowing the song (always liked "Fast Car" a bit myself, but nevermind).

Just so in-character and meaningful, excellent work.

This is great. I love the MidvalleyxWolfwood pairing, and it's such a rarity to see it around here. I like very much, and hey, please write more.

YAY! I found it again! FINALLY! XD ... Y'see, I was at school, -supposed- to be my work, when I stumbled across this little fic... and... the bell rang before I had gotten through the second paragraph! I couldn't get it outta my head and was all like freakin' out for about a week and then- YAY! I FIND IT ON A LINK! woot!

XD Yeah...

*sniffles* Beautiful, just beautiful :) It's real hard trying to find really GOOD Midvalley fics...

Even harder to find really GOOD Midvalley yaoi fics. Fantastical writing, as usual, and please, please, PLEASE keep up the good work.

Yours Strangely,

Shardd the Spider

P.S. What the hell? What's up with that 'Cute Bunny' person? How the hell is the authour homophobic! Dude, if you don't like it, why the fuck are you reading it? It did say, pretty damn clearly that it was YAOI. Yes. YAOI. In Trigun. Shock Horror. Harry Potter's fics are hella lot more graphic than this... does that mean you prefer little, underaged boys getting it on as apposed to two men? And yaoi isn't hentai! What the hell? Sure, this has elements of shounen-ai in it, well, more so than real hardcore yaoi, but since when did yaoi become hentai? Huh. Musta missed a memo. ;) Yay for the flames! "You must write corny gay fics about fags with angst."

snerk. I love that.

I really don't like songfics with the lyrics interspersed with the original text. It makes the story hard to read and distracts from what the story's trying to say, I think.

I wasn't usre what I'd think of this when I saw the summary because, as I said, not a songfic person, and also Midvalley gives me the heebie-jeebies, but I thought this was a pretty interesting concept. I would have liked to see it worked out more, a little more characterization work (possibly a scene in the past, then a scene in the present), but overall, I enjoyed it.

Keep writing! _

Yaoi, in Trigun? What the hell? Yaoi is for hentai only, not PG anyway, because yaoi means two guys...ugh. Are you some kind of homophobe? Maybey Christopher Lowell has melted your brain out of your head and replaced with, "You must write corny gay fics about fags with angst." BORING, write something more interesting.

Poor Midvalley. I love this fic - it's so sad!