I really enjoyed all these, especially 7 and 10, the idea of Vincent being in trouble with Marlene makes me smile, for some reason. Each short sentence tells a complete story, so well done :)

Ah, once again a wonderful little piece. I love reading your work, because you convey so much in so litte. I love it whenever I get an email saying you've been active. Lord knows how many people I have recommended to read your work. I do love it. Now for raving fangirl moment.

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Burnt.

And thus ends to moment.

Thanks for the quick read. Enjoyable.

Yoru

It's amazing how someone can say so much with so few words. You do this beautifully, seeming to strain the stories and keep those few intense bits that burn into your brain and either break it or spur it into gibberish. I like the variety of the content's mood too, although it comes off more sad than happy.

Cloud- you will never be perceived as anything but broken. (Although come to think of it, this is probably because your creators love to play Break The Cutie with you...)

Good job! Great! ...Not so good with the compliments, but I really liked this. The snippets are enough to get me wondering what's on the other side of them. :p

Very insightful, or as insightful as you could possibly be in one line. I like the ideas and I like the images. Particularly like the mental picture of Vincent at a tea-party...! Extra praise goes for mixing your genres, good mix of angst and humour. Particularly like the line, "Sometimes he's standing right there, and I miss him anyway." So very true.
Good stuff!
Biskitty x