 aSqueeIntheDistance 2009-07-23 . chapter 1Perfect. |
 Lightshade 2009-05-31 . chapter 1A well put together and unique idea. Loved all the nuances and little characteriztaion bits, and especially liked the idea of Hollis introducing the two. In fact, I'd love to see a follow up chapter of that meeting. |
 tanith-4486 2009-05-23 . chapter 1nice |
 IrishRoulette 2009-05-08 . chapter 1This is a great idea! It's hard to find stories about Hollis, and this one is awesome. I especially love how he introduced Rorschach and Daniel; I never thought about that. Very well-written, too. |
 Agent0Gecko 2009-05-07 . chapter 1This was very sweet. I really liked the idea, and it was nice that it was Hollis who introduced Rorschach and Dan. Great story! |
 Kairan1979 2009-05-07 . chapter 1That was really interesting - Rorschach and Nite Owl II meeting thanks to Hollis. |
 Archivist 2009-05-07 . chapter 1*starry eyes* Hey, I saw that prompt! I was hopinng someone would do it.
I'm sorta glad this isn't romance (I can't.. imagine it) and a great theory to how Dan and Rorschach met. Heck, that might have been a bit heartbreaking for Hollis to find what happened to the Crimebusters in the end. Now I feel sorry for him.Guh.
I loved the little hints and little glances into Rorschach from someone who is a stranger to him. The freckled and sweet-tooth parts were my fav. |
 InTheBellyofTheWhale 2009-05-07 . chapter 1 This is really sweet! Especially love the part when Hollis called him son.
Please write more I like this. I really like your writing. |