I love it :) you need to write more like now :P

Excellent! You should write more or at least tell me how it ends lol. Do Soubi and Seimei have a show down? I need to know lol

I love it
i like how seimei and soubi were fighting over ritsuka
please continue!

OMG please continue!
I would love to see what would happen

My god. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!! *bows politely, hands together* This story is so KAWAII!

This is good. I really like Seimei in this story. Ritsuka might need to be angstier but maybe not...?

More please!

CUTE! :]

Omg I love this, especially the 2nd chapter. It's so sweet and cute, yet has that hint of a forbidden obsession in it. I really can't wait to hear more from you! I hope you update this soon with another interesting chapter!

O. You capture the mindset of the characters and twisted into a perverted belivable stance and the flow of your writing is clear. You're really talented, keep this up!

wow this is so good! Please continue it, it's so hard to find an Aoyagicest fic, never mind a well-written one!

Interesting & I'm eagerly awaiting more!

YAY for Aoyagicest!! ^^ Seimei is so deliciously twisted. Good to see some Soubi in there as well. Can't wait for the next update!! Xx

Very nice so far; I'm definitely enjoying this. I didn't see any flaws to point out; mostly just some minor confusion about how the two chapters relate, but judging from your author's note it will all come together, so that's more of a good thing than a problem.

Pretty much, I have no criticism to give so far, so I'll leave it at a "good job".

Yay! This site really needs more (esp. good) Aoyagicest. I can't wait to read more!