Come ON! That chapter was so short! I hate you.( well,not really, but hurry!)

nice job cant wait for the next

This is a awesome story keep it up!

Maybe u should add team rocket in a episode, that would be more fun.

But again: Awesome Story plz update

Great story. I can't wait for a update.

Your story is great! Please, please continue it!

I know Gliscor returned during the Sinnoh League but Monferno's now an infernape. Grotle's a Torterra now and Ambipom never returned.

Wheee. Paul. o:

Hopefully he's changed, I don't like it when he gets angry... x_x. And I wanna see Ash's battle! :D.

The story and the idea are great though, although I know nothing about the Sinnoh Facilities... x_x.

Aww well this was still good!

Ah, I almost forgot, what would a pearlshipping story be without Paul in it? :P

I agree, it was a really short chapter, and it was a really long time since you were updating...

Oh, well, I'll be here for the next chapter.

so Dawns not doind contests no more? (thats harsh) but a new advanture calls for new expiriences . haha! and the chapters are a little short but they satisfy

Haha this looks like its going to be good ;)

please write more stories! Please they are really good.

I think I already reviewed this, but I would really like to see this story go on, seriously it's great!

But then... You're the author :p

I really love the story plot and how you write, but I hoped that there would be more to the story so that it would be a little more conclusive to how the adventure turns out, and more, how Ash and Dawn's friendship changes too.

wow this is an awesome story!

I love it

you've inspired me alot :D