Don't say it sucks. That puts off your readers. I really really liked it. Then you were like "And it sucks." And I was like, "Oh." Just don't do that. If a reader saw that first, it's possible they wouldn't give your story a second glance.

That's the only contructive criticism I've got. Your grammar is all good, and I like the style of writing. I like how it's told from Seamus's point of view, but it never directly says that. I like how the only thing he is focusing on is Dean and how he doesn't go into detail about anything else. It really brings out the feeling that this a quite moment between these two and only these two, but it also shows a glimpse from outside their moment. You capture the emotions very good I think. It may be short, but it's well written and a nice fic.

The only bad thing is is that you said it sucked.

OH! And you spelled the word down "don."

I quote you: Why can't we go don fighting, like Fred?

Other than that, very good.

It's cute :) I love how they stand together no matter what. It is short though. I really think you should consider adding on to this!

aw best friends to the very end :D