| Reviews for Daughter |
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TeelanaFalcao 4/1/13 . chapter 20Essa é sem dúvida uma das melhores estórias que li. Ela é simplesmente incrível! |
Wolf 1/25/13 . chapter 20 Best Story ever! Great Job ! |
Adeela 10/27/12 . chapter 20Loved this story..reading it again for third time :) |
Guest 8/2/12 . chapter 20 another great chapter. I truly hope that after they are married that Teela is permitted to learn adam's secret. or if not, then she "Accidentally" discovers the truth for herself. Orko found out by being at the wrong place at the wrong time, so could Teela. |
senivatar 7/30/12 . chapter 20 the end? seems unfinish to me, post one epilogue, please. |
Rosariusarcanum 7/30/12 . chapter 20 Over all I the story has been good. But I really think a wrap up is needed. You have Lyran, and the wedding itself, also does Adam assume the the postion of king after the wedding?. Ending it here kinda leaves you wondering what happened. |
AlPhalover 7/30/12 . chapter 20 Very rich and detailed. You made knew characters who were well rendered. One wonders about Ryan. Didn't one of his people resent teela. Perhaps she loved him? Or what about Adora? Very well dome! |
busard 7/29/12 . chapter 20great chapter. I love it very much, but I have hoped to see Ryan's reaction too. I really feel like if there is something left out. Maybe you can made a sequel for that. Good story none the less. |
Guest 7/22/12 . chapter 19 It doesn't look like Ryan is going to have much of a chance after all. There doesn't seem to be a lot fo interaction going on there. This was another wonderful update, but I'm afraid of how much is left to cover. It seems like there is quite a bit. Unless, of course, the last chapter is the length of three normal chapters. ;) |
alphalover 7/17/12 . chapter 19I am waiting for the story to be complete, so I can read these new chapters and comment as a whole. I've loved what I've read! |
Guest 7/5/12 . chapter 18 marvelous chapter. |
ponytail 7/5/12 . chapter 18Fantastic update as always. I did find it odd that Adam is one year ahead and Teela seemed like she was still on day two. Just wondering if the order was meant to be switched around. I was surprised to find Teela not having her own stories of having been hit on. ;) |
ponytail 6/26/12 . chapter 17I'm expecting a wonderful chapter after such a long hiatus. :) I love the character development of Snow Kingdom main characters, but I almost want to skip ahead 2-3 years. ;) |
TheJasAlex 5/21/12 . chapter 17I truly enjoy this story, the character development, twists and emotional roller coaster I usually feel after a chapter keeps a smile on my face when i find out that another update has been written to one of my favorite childhood saga's. I am also personally holding onto my seat as these Ryan times are written. Cannot wait for the next chapter. |
banshee1968 5/15/12 . chapter 16Thanks for the update. I like how it's going. Looking forward to more. |