OMG XD, that was so freaking AWESOME I love the way you crafted the story. Brilliant

OMG...this is...i found myself holding my breath reading this!it so intense!and went zuko just says "stay..."...i can't even describe what it feels...lol...very good one!

The tension between these two is beautiful and beautifully conveyed. Describing that much passion with the characters barely touching each other and practically immobile takes talent, and I think it's actually best that this didn't develop into a lemon; their feeling of being drawn to one another and their moral dilemma is the point, not the actual act.
Brava.

*pants*

Oh god, that got my pulse going like crazy, I feel like I was the one sandwiched between a wall and a sexy brooding man.

It's been said before, but for a fic where they barely even moved, that was incredibly hot. The tension was unbelievable (in a good way), and captured very well. That tension, when you're both thinking about whether or not you should could kiss and you know you're both thinking about it and you know it would just take a few inched movements, but it feels like miles and neither of you can move, yeah, you got it perfectly. How tiny movements seems like sweeping ones.

Gah. Yeah, I could almost feel the heat of their skin. That was great.

M... nice.

This melted me into a grinning, purring, puddle of goo. Well done!

Wow...if only that would happen in the real Avatar show...

I love your oneshots. I have to say that I am one of your biggest fans! Your art is also pretty good too. I love the way you write, it's so romantic but unike at the same time. You have an amazing talent in writing and your story ' Beyond the rising sun' was the first Zutara story I ever read. Keep on keeping people like me entertained.
Miss Katara

Oh god... (speechless)
:3 (I obviously loved it though)

Wow. For not doing anything, that was hot and delicious. Zutara is just perfect. Sequel?

"It was almost as if he were settling, assuming the most comfortable stance, like a man who intended to remain where he was indefinitely." - *raises hand* YESPLZ!

good golly, that was HOT! O.O i feel like i need to fan myself, and it wasn't even smut. there wasn't even one kiss! and yet i'm left open-mouthed. man, you are GOOD.

would it be horrible of me to ask for a sequel? i don't normally like adultery fics of any sort, but after this fic, i'm sure you'd write their secret shady escapades in a way that is just downright gorgeous. i'd love to see it continue. and perhaps eventually, not be so secret or shady anymore ;)

Awesome writing. I absolutely loved it. It reminded my of Josh Gracin's song 'Stay with Me (Brass Bed)' so adorable. Thanks for writing. I look forward to the next one-shot/story you have. ^-^

Brilliant work as always Faye. Nice one, hope your muse continues to inspire, keep at it.

Whoa, this was hot!

Even though ‘nothing’ really happened (yet, XD), but just think of the possibilities!

I loved the way you summarized her true feelings, even though she tries to fight it:

‘She knew her diction betrayed her. Not can’t or won’t. Shouldn’t.’

:)

Anyway, no, I don’t know ravenhpltc24 personally – and I sure wish I had her skills, but no…however, you can get in touch with her and make a request on her DA account, I guess - same name, just go on ‘search’(I would add a link, but as I understand it, FF doesn't allow it...)

And yeah, isn’t she amazing? All of her AMV’s leave me breathless; she's been one of my favorite AMV artists for a while, and I was overjoyed when I learned that she is, after all, a Zutarian :)
(…definitely needs to make more Zutara AMV’s *nods*)
:>)

Oh...well, pardon my language but...**! That was an awesome story!! I love you, really, I love you! I think you are a great and awesome Zutara writer and should receive honors and medals and a whole bunch of other things. And if I could make a video, I would. Sadly, I'm about as talented and knowledgeable about that as the common population is...which means not a whole damn lot.
Muses are a pain, but yours...very good! Keep coming out with these, please!

this was very steamy hot! Haha!
I love the intense words...Again this has inspired me to continue my story, "Four Seasons."
I am not sure if you are a current reader of mine.
But if you'll in the mood for some Zutara, feel free to read my story.