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Hazmatt
2009-08-05 . chapter 8
Amazing story! Absolutely inredible! I love it! The parallelism at the end of this chapter mirroring the first chapter was brilliant!
Hazmatt
2009-08-05 . chapter 7
Great chapter! I love it! Both of them are trying to not push the other into something physical that they both want! Brilliant!
Hazmatt
2009-08-05 . chapter 6
Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed it! Absolutely perfect! I'm glad that it seems like things will work out for them and I hope that they do!
Hazmatt
2009-08-05 . chapter 5
Brilliant chapter! Take the cars out of the equation, and you know Lilly's going to be the one kicking butt! I really enjoyed it! I love what Lilly said in the elevator! Perfect!
Hazmatt
2009-08-05 . chapter 4
What a twist! I really wasn't expecting that! Amazing chapter! I hope Scotty can catch up in time to prevent Frankie from trying again!
Hazmatt
2009-08-05 . chapter 3
Brilliant chapter! I really enjoyed it! I loved the Romeo and Julliet references, as well as the part with the comment about teaching the canaries to sing! Perfect!
Hazmatt
2009-08-05 . chapter 2
Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it! Very moving!
Hazmatt
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed it! I'm glad that Lilly's okay!
FloatingAmoeba
2009-07-15 . chapter 8
Hi!

Well, I'm finally back, and slowly but surely making my way through all the FanFiction updates, LOL! Anyway, this was such a great way to end. So typically brilliant of Lilly and Scotty to have their wires crossed.

I can't wait to read more from you!
cyn23
2009-07-05 . chapter 8
hey, thank you for a wonderfull story, i really liked it. it is a great wedding present, i think she will be happy with it
karizmadreamer
2009-07-04 . chapter 8
LOL, i love the ending it's really quick and funny! Great job, congrats, it's a really good story, i definitely enjoyed it!!
ViolaLucien
2009-07-04 . chapter 8
Wow, that was a great (and hot) ending for this story. You know, I liked this story right from the beginning. You described very well the tension between Lil and Scotty. I hope you keep writing more CC stories. The last sentence caused me to giggle :)
cyn23
2009-06-18 . chapter 7
hey, great new chapter, i love it
fbi-woman
2009-06-18 . chapter 7
I don't know how I missed this story until now. I really like it, especially the twist on who ran her off the road. Much better than what really happened IMO. And I really hope you change your mind about writing a certain chap lol cuz it sounds like they sure want you to :P. And of course I hope you update again soon, I'm quite liking this.
Lilly-Scotty
2009-06-18 . chapter 7
Im so excited. Its getting good. Great chapter. Can't wait to see more. :)
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